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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
wow dear awesm concept ..it was really touching ..rona agya padh ke first swayam n now rey😭poor taani..koi bhi uske feeling ko nhi smhjta..n abt chap 2 yeh kya ?shuru hote h khtm ho gaya?not fair...plsss jaldi se update karo n lamba wala update karo nahi toh ...😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Sorry for the late comment!
Loved both parts!
Reyam and gang are so mean! 😡
At least she has a sweet best-friend! 😊
Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
it was emotional
i luv it thanks for PM
n do put nxt prt soon n
do PM me again kkk
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesome! Love it. Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
lovd both prtz just amazing👏👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awww so chotu
Nxt one big chahiye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
awesome SS...different and interesting concept!
please continue soon and add me to the pm list...waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
gr8 update di

but bohot chhota tha
and sorry for being late😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys thank you so much for comments!!😊!Sorry for late update!!!

Chapter 3


Tani reaches the house where she is greeted by dolly didi ( maid )

Dolly didi- are tani baby muje to laga ki aap Kal aayegi...

Tani- ha vo actually mein...(tani didn't knew what to say)

Dolly didi- are koi baat nai...aap bahar kyu khadi hai andar aaye na...are mein bhi kab se bole ja Rahi hu...aap andar aaye...

Tani comes in...

Tani- sorry dolly didi mein ne aap ko itni raat ko disturb kiya...

Dolly didi- are tani baby aap yeh kya keh rai hai...Aisa Kuch nai hai chaiye mein aap ko aap ka karmra dikhati hu...

Tani- thanks

Dolly didi led her to her room...

Dolly didi- tani baby agar aap ko Kuch bhi chaiye to muje be jijak bata dena...

Tani- thik hai dolly didi or thank you...

Dolly didi- thik hai chaliye ab aap so jaye aap than gai hogi na...

Tani- ji

Dolly didi leaves...and tani goes to sleep...

NEXT MORNING

Tani wakes up early and quickly gets ready...she then stands in front of mirror and talks to her self " aaj ek Naya din hai Matlab Nayi shuruvat...or jaise ki mom kehti hai ki humesha andgere ke bad ujala hota hai...vaise hi mein apni life mein ujala lavn gi..ab mein kisi ke liye nai rovngi..."

With a new determination she heads to kitchen...

Tani sights as she enters kitchen "pata nai yaha aisa kya hai par jabi yaha Aati hu ek ajeeb se feeling Aati hai...himmat Milti hai... Khair abhi insab ke liye time nahi hai...muje Sab se Pehele vp sir ko call karna hoga, bata na hoga ki aaj mein nai aa rahi"

She takes her cell phone and is about to call vp sir but to her surprise she got a call from him... She picks up...

Tani- good morning sir

Vp- good morning... Tani mein ne tume yeh inform kar ne ke liye call kiya tha ki tume ek Naya club start karna hoga

Tani- Kaisa club

Vp- Matlab ki tume after collage ya before collage ek club start kar na hoga...club koi bhi ho sakta hai jaise ki singing, creative writing yah phir Aisa Kuch bhi but usme at least 7 members hone chaiye...

Tani- par sir aachanak ek Naya club kyu?

Vp- authorities ne decide kiya hai ki hum sirf dance mein hi nahi Hume kisi or field mein bhi aacha hona chaiye...

Tani- ok sir aap muje thoda time dijye...

Vp- ok tani as soon as you think which club you want to start inform me..ok?

Tani- ok sir but sir I wanted to inform you ki mein aaj collage nai aa pavgi...I hope that's not a problem..

Vp- of course it's not a problem...u can have a day off...

Tani- thank you sir...

They hung up...


At swayams house

He wakes up and looks at the clock...

" dus baj gaye...bohot late hi Gaya lekin tani...( as soon as he says tani and remembers what happend last night and as he remembers what he said he felt like dying) oh shoot yeh mein ne kya kar diya...how could I??( pain was clearly visible in his eyes) mein ne tani se aisi baat kaise ki??pat nai vo kaisa feel kar rai hogi... Oh no I just hope vo Kuch Asa vaisa na Kare..." With that he ran towards tani's room...he knocks on the door but as he doesn't get any reply he opens the door and goes in...but he finds the room empty...he gets shocked and tears starts forming in his eyes... realising that tani left him...He falls on ground and shouts "tani"...


Here rey is on the door, he gets shocked hearing swayams shout and gets tensed " oh god I just hope tani thik ho"...he runs upstairs...he had came here to talk to tani and clear all misunderstanding between them...He goes upstairs and finds swayam on floor crying...he gets really really worried...he goes to him...

Rey- swayam...kya hua...

Swayam- Rey tani

Rey gets alert hearing tani's name...

Rey- tani tani to kya hua...(he asks in panic tone)

Sharon- ha swayam kya hua tani ko...

Both rey And swayam turns around to find Sharon and gang standing there...

Rey- guys Tum log yaha?

Simmi- ha vo actually Tum Dono rehearsal ke liye nahi aye to...Hum rey ke ghar bhi gaye the par Tum vaha nai Thai to...

Sharon- swayam Pehele niche chalo phir baat kar te hai...

Simmi- yeah let's go guys...

All goes down and sits in living room...

Rey- swayam tu kya keh raha tha or tani kaha hai?

Swayam- pata nai...

Rey- what do u mean pata nai

Then swayam tells them what happend last night...they all were shocked and guilty...rey couldnt belive it...when tani needed him most, he hurted her and blameed her...his eyes became moist...swayam was confuse as why was everyone else is felling guilty he should be the one to fell guilty...
Swayam- guys tum logo ko kya hua???
all looked at him and them looked at down...no was able to look in his eyes...they knew somewhere they were at fault...
Swayam- guys will u all plz stop thi and tell me what's the matter...ek to mein yaha already pareshan hu...pata nai tani kaise hogi...vo thik bhi hogi ya nai...
Ding Dong!
All hears the door bell...
swayam- shayad tani hogi...
Saying this he runs to door...rey and gang also runs behind him...
Swayam open the door but it was not tani...it was some other girl...swayam was shocked and others were confused...
Seeing swayam's face, girls expression change...angry to worried...because she can guess that he had been crying...
She goes up to him and puts her hand on his shoulder...
girl- swayam u ok???
Here Sharon was so angry " Who the hell is she and how dare she???"
Precap- Guess who is the girl???
Sorry for the boring update but keep reading intresting part will be coming...
And buddy me if u want PM's 😊

Edited by nis_n - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
OMG LOVED IT!!! CONTINUE!!
(First comment :P )

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