A TAAREY FF-DO DILON KE DAASTAAN UPDATED !!! - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nagutaarey

nice update😊😊😊

precap was asm



THANKS DEARO😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

Aww u brought tears in my eye
Rey luv taani so much haaye
Luv how rey is taking care of taani
N how rey was tensed n scared to loss taani
N thn luv tht taani is with rey n rey mom know
Everything but waiting for tr romance n confession



THANKS SO MUCH RADDHI DEAR😳😳😳 AND DEAR IT REAALLY REALLY MEANS ALOT TO MEE THANKU TONS ONCE AGAIN😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: premlata

Awesome update

Rey take care of taani soo cute
Update soon



THANK U DEAR...😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: my_angel...

Awesome update

Rey take care of taani soo cute
Update soon
PRECAP IS INTERESTING
PM ME AS SOON AS U UPDATE



THANKU DEAR AND YEA SURE ILL PM YOU😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

Superb updte
Taarey part ws soo cute
sid teasing Rey aww..
Sanaya toh gayi ab
hw cheap..
Poor taani ...
Rey tokk her hospital
w8ing for nxt
thnkeww for PM



THANKS DEAR SWEET COMMENT LOVED IT😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

awesome and emtoional update
loved it
lvoed the way rey and sid concerned for taani
rey is taking care of her
and now he took her to his home



THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR IT REALLY ALOT TO MEE😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reyanks

Rey Taani ek sath rahenge!!!

Uss shanaya ka plan to fail hona hi tha...ye to rebound ho gaya!
Acha hi hua uska muh jal gaya!!!
Cant wait for taarey moments!



THANKS REYANKS FOR THIS SWEET COMMENT I LOVED IT😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lechu10

super and nice story ... plz pm me also ... 👍🏼



OHH THANKU DEAR AND YEA SURE ILL PM YOU😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
anki baby good to c ur update after long long time
and exams k wajah se commenting late...
waise pls update this soon
the whole canteen scene was so cute
shanaya is such a *****! i mean...
how can she yaar???
i m just falling for taarey here more and more...
pls cintinue soon...
cant wait for ot scene!
love u!!!

chapter 11
lovely chapter
cant explain the beauty of this
pure love is so well explained
loved this
update soon!!!
cant wait 4 precap!!!


AWW HIMA YOU BACK AND READING THISS FF FEELS SO GOOD TO ME DEAR PATA HAI SINCE THESE DAYS I WAS MISSING YOUR COMMENTS ON THIS FF...SERIOUSLY YOU BACK ME AND THIS FF FEELING COMPLETED...
AND THANKU SO MUCH DEAR🤗😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

HEYAAA GUYSS!!! 😃

So i m back again with an update for you all guys...par usse pehlee guyss thank you so so much for giving so much love to this ff ..thank you for all your lovely and sweet comments...and now here's your update so go enjoy reading😳


Chapter 12


Rey holded taani's hand he bent on his both knees and keep both his eyes on taani's hand signifying she means life to him...the beautiful angel was sleeping peacefully...

Suddenly a beautiful fairy that was taani's mother she appeared ... rey felt the presence of someone he lifted his face ..what he saw ..he was left dumbstruck he could not believe a fairy with her magic wand was standing infront of her...

Fairy: rey you love taani haina...

Rey: aap kaun hain ...kahan se aayin hain aur aapko mera naam kaise pata hai...

Fairy: rey mein taani ki mother aur ek pari hun jo swarg se aayi hun tumne kisi normal ladki nai balki ek pari ki beti se pyaar kiya hai...rey kyunki tum taani se pyaar karte ho toh mein uski responsibility tumhe deti hun...tume mujhse vada karnaa hoga ki kabhie bhi tum uski aankhon mein ek aanshun bhi nai aane doge...

Rey: just could not belive...kya?aap kya keh rahi hain iska matlabb taani bhi ek pari hogi naa...

Fairy: haan vo pari thi pichle janam mein iss janam mein vo ek normal ladki par haan ek pari ki beti jarur hai lekin chah ke bhi mein uski koi help nai kar sakti isiliye uski responsibility tumhe de rahi hun..chalo abb mujhse vaada karo ...

Rey: aap uski mother hain...mujhe kuch samaj hi nai aa raha ...

The fairy told all the story to rey how she died in an accident and taani's dad married other woman and her stepmother use to humiliate her and she threw her out the house so taani started living in an orphange..and taani wants to be a dancer ...her dream..how she longs and craved for true love...

Rey : wow I must say taani bahut strong itna sab ho jaane ke baad bhi vo hamesha hasti rehti hai aur sabka khyaal rakti kisi ko apni problems nai batati aur sabko akele face karti rahi...aap chinta mat kigyiye aaj se taani meri responsibility hai mein uska khyaal rakhunga.kabhie auski aankhon mein ekk aanshun nai aane dungaa ..use apni jaan se bhi pyaar karunga..itna pyaar ki vo apne saare dukh bhul jayega aur uske dancer banane ka sapna bhi mein poora karunga...

Fairy: rey beta god bless you ..i hope tum dono hamesha khush raho...mujhe tum se yahi ummed thi aur haan beta yeh taani ki magic ball hai jo vo orphange mein bhul gyi thi isse tum apne pass rakho yeh tum dono kabhie mujhe bulane ke liye use kar sakte ho okk aur haan beta ek baat aur...shanaya...

Rey : Aap chinta mat kigyiee and iske liye shukriyaa...and shanaya kya kiya usne...

Fairy: beta shanaya se taani ko bachana tumhari responsibility hai..usne hi taani ko marvaane ke kashish kari thi...kahin aisa naa ho uski vajeh se tum taani ko kho do beta vo taani ki jaan ke peech padi hai...

Rey : kya shanaya ne mein yeh kabhie sapne mein bhi nai soch sakta tha ki vo itna gir jaayegii..aap chinta mat kigyiye..taani ko kuch nai hoga mein abb uske saath rahungaa har pal aur shanaya ka kya karna vo mein aur sid dekh lenge...

Fairy: rey beta abb mujhe chalna hoga mein phir aaungi tum dono se milne..apna aur taani ka khyaal rakhnaa theeke...

And a magic happened and the fairy disappeared...

Rey was still amazed and shocked what happened some mins ago...he was so angry on shanaya his blood was boiling that shanaya how she could even think of it...but then he thought ki vo shanaya ko aisa sabak sikhayegaa ki uska saara gamand chur ho jayega...meri taani ki jaan leni ki kashish kii naa tumne abb tum dekho shanaya kya haal karte hain tumhara...

Then he looked at taani who was sleeping peacefully unaware of all this and then he looked at the magic ball...

Rey s P.O.V

Taani wow tum toh bahut special nikli yaar ..tum ekk pari thi aur ho abhi ek pari ki beti ho kyaa baat hai..abb toh tumhe propose bhi bahut special way mein hi karna padega mujhe aur pari ki tarah special feel karvana padega ...taani tumahare liye toh mein kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar hun...pata hi nai chala kab tum meri jaan ban gyin..abb apni jaan ka dhyan toh rakhna padega na mujhe...I love you taani more then my life...jitna tum pyaar ke liye tarsi ho naa I promise vo kami mein apni chahat se bahr dungaa...he keet the magic ball on taani's side bed table and kissed taani's forehead ...and left the room silently...

Next day early morning it was ...a beautiful a sunrise was there through the window ..taani woke up and what she saw she was amazed the whole room was decorated with pink coloured flowers bouquets...and suddenly rey and his mom appeared in the room with breakfast in their hand...

Pooja: Good morning taani beta ..abb kaisa lag raha hai..

Taani : Good mrng aunty ..mein theek hun abb..aap mere liye inta kar rahin hain..agar maa hoti toh vo bhi aise hi kartin..

Pooja: haan toh mujhe maa bana lo...vaise bhi abb toh but..she cut by rey

Rey: maa taani ko change karwaa ke uski dressing karke aap use naastaa kar waa digyiee.. and good morning taani...

Pooja: haan beta theeke..

Taani : Good morning ...rey yeh sab aapne kia I mean yeh flowers...

Rey: haan vo I thought tumhe achcha lagega so...kaisa laga???

Taani: bahut achcha laga rey...thanku

Pooja was continuously looking at both rey and taani she was happy seeing them..

Rey: maa mein bahar wait kar raha ok...and he left...

Meanwhile rey called sid and told him everything that he got to know that it was shanaya behind all this...and they thought of a plan...

Here taani had a bath she changed her clothes which pooja gave her a beautiful baby pink salwar kurti..and then pooja does the taani's dressing..and make her have the breakfast...

Taani: thanku aunty ops maa...

Pooja : taani maa ko bhi koi thanku bolta hai kya beta han? Jao mein tumse baat nai kar rahi...tumhare liye meine do hafte ke chutti li office se aur tum aise kar rahi ho...

Taani: ohh nai sorry maa I promise dobara aise nai karungi kyaa karun itne pyaar ki adaat nai haina and tears rolled down her cheeks..

Pooja: taani beta aise rote nai hain..agar rey ne dekh lia mujhe bahut daantegaa vo jaldi se aansun pooch and she wiped taani's tears and hugged her...taani..mujhe tumahri vajeh se ekk beti mili hai jise mein derr sara pyaar karungi ek maa ki tarah and abb iss pyaar ki adat daal lo theeke..and both smiled...achcha suno beta mein mandir jaa rahin hun..

Tum tak apna dhyan rakna jab tak theeke sambhal kar uthna...aur thodi derr mein medicine le lena ...ok

Taani: ji maa...

And pooja left the room and said to rey mein mandir jaa ri hun...taani ka dhyan Rakhna beta..

Rey: ji maa...

And as soon as pooja left rey entered in taani's room ...taani was trying to pick up the medicine but it was paining so se could not..

Rey rushed immediately and he picked up the medicine...and then handed it to taani ...taarey smiled at eachother..taani had the medicine...

Rey: taani tum theek ho naa abb

Taani: rey han theek hai par thoda dard hai...

Rey: taani kya tum mere saath chalogii...

Taani: kahan rey and kaise mein chal nai paa ri weakness ki vajeh se ...

Rey just immediately picked up taani in her arms..taani was so surprised...and carefully he moved took taani to terrace...and he made taani stand back...there were so may ballons...and rey brought red roses for taani...suddenly the weather became strange the wind started blowing...and clouds appeared the clear sky filled with rage...and it started raining...

Taani was so happy to see its raining she started enjoying the rain dancing with open and stretched hands...rey was so happy to see taani like this he was standing there in roses in his hands adoring his love...

Suddenly because of weakness taani she was about abt to fall ...rey ran immediately and holded taani and catched her in his arms both had a eyelock taani shuly started looking down...but rey he cannot just move his eyes away from taani...in pink coloured suit and she fully drenched because of rain and rey too...

Finally taani said rey ...and rey realized what was happening he made taani stand..and offered roses to taani ...taani took them she smiled and ran the other side ...rey ruffled his hair...

He moved towards taani ...and taani blushing..saw rey coming towards her she started moving back...rey was continuously moving towards taani...taani was moving back...finally thap taani s back touched the wall and taarey came very close to each other...taani closed her eyes...rey was just lost in taani that moment he moved a little bit and kissed taani on forehead...taani smiled she ...and opened her eyes ...and she was about to run again but rey holded her hand made her stop from going...and then slightly he made taani face her...both were intensely looking in each other's eyes...rey moved a bit forward..and taani she suddenly faint out of nervousness..rey he holded her and picked her upp in his arms...and moved back to taani's room lay her on the bed ...sprinkled some water on taani...

Taani came back to consciousness and she saw rey infront of her...she smiled looking at him..and rey was worried thinking why taani fainted...

Rey: taani tum theek toh ho naa I think tumhe bahut hi zyada weakness taani mujhe naa tumhara bahut dhyan rakhnaa padega...tum naa jaldi se dress change karo taani..rukho he opened the cupboard and saw some suits he pick a white one..

Yeh lo taani jaldi se change karo tumhe sardi lag jayega aur cold ho jayega ...taani goes to change and rey to change his clothes...

Rey came back after some mins with juice and fruits ...taani yeh lo juice piyo tum tumhe bahut weakness hai..

Taani: rey mein theek hun aap itna pareshaan mat hoyiye...

Chup karo tum and yeh juice piyo...and rey started cutting apples foe her...taani drank the juice and had the fruits...

Like this each and every day passed rey and pooja took care of taani...rey he use to make taani had his medicines properly, her food...taani started falling for rey more she could the feel that rey loves her a lot ..she saw so much concern for her in rey's eyes ..she was so happy to see this and pooja she cared for taani like a mother

Sid too visited taani and all of them use to had lot of fun...

Finally one week passed like this and taani had recovered a lot...her weaknesshad gone now and her pain jahan use goli lagi thi..vo bhi bahut kam ho chukaa thaa..

...

In between sid ek din shanaya se milne gya uske ghar and told her taani ko goli lagi thi tum usse milne ni aayin...chalo koi ni abb mil lena she is completely fine now...

Shanaya was hell shocked when she listened she could not believe that taani was still alive she was frowning with anger sid noticed this..he said shanaya kya mujhe ekk glass paani mil sakta hai...shanaya goes to bring water and sid immediately runs to shanaya's room and exchanges his makeup kit with the one he had and runs back to hall..

Shanaya : ye lo aur kuch chahiye tumhe..you can leave agar kuch naa batane ke liye toh...

As you like theeke I m going..and sid with a smirk left the place...

Shanaya she could not believe what sid said...she thought abb toh koi aur plan banana padega...but then she remembered use apne dad ke success party ke liye ready hona tha so she took bath...and got dressed she was so frustrated that she did not anything and just applied the makeup after some mins she started screaming when she saw herself in the mirror..her full face spoiled down becoz of the makeup and it caused allergy on her face ...he started crying seeing herself and threw everything in anger...

...

Here sid to rey on phone ..rey kaam ho gya abb mazae aayenge jab shanaya shoot ke liye aayegii tab dekte kaise iska gamand nai tutaa...

Rey: sid tu naa hota yeh kabhie possible nai ho paata mein chachta hun jo dard usne meri taani ko diya haina vahi dard vo bhi mehsus kare...

Sid: meri taani han not bad rey..abbi tak toh tune usse propose bhi nai kiya aur usse pehle hi meri taani han..copyright hai kya tera lol?

Rey: han hai mera copyright taani sirf meri tujhe koi problem...toh bta de mujhe

Sid: naa baba mujhe thodi marna...achche yeh bata tu taani ko kab propose kar raha hai?

Rey: jaise hi taani completely theek ho jayegii waise hi...and uske liye teri help chaiye mujhe samaj gya..

Sid: jo tu bol mein taiyaar hun dude...

Rey: baad mein bataunga abhi phone rak taani ki medicines ka time ho raha hai..

Sid: achcha pitajii will call you later...

And he hung upp the call!

...

Precap******

Taarey confession finally...taarey finally unite forever...❤️

...

so guys itzz done finally mera job aapka nai...chalo abb hit like and give me derr saare comments so that i can give you update jaldi jaldii😆...and silent readers plzz plzz comment mere liye..plzz

love you😳

anki

Edited by rakhiankita - 11 years ago

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