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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nahaananya



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Posted: 11 years ago

part 21

i love the feedbacks...i hope feedbacks will b like this only...😆



Virman reach home...ramu kaka open the door...

Rk-beta , i prepare food u both go n change...

m-kaka...what is this u didn't slept yet...u leav all the work n goto sleep fast...

rk-but beta...

m-kaka(cute angry look with hands on her hips)

kaka smile n went to sleep...manvi turn n look at virat who was stairing at his wife...who care not only for him but also for everyone in the house...virat move towards her...manvi gulp...

m-u go n change i bring the dinnr there only...

she rush to kitchn...virat brush his hairs n went to his room...manvi arrnge the food in tray they both are tired so she decided to have dinnr in their room coz everyone in house are sleeping n the light can distrb their sleep...manvi kick the door of the room n saw virat holding his stmach n sweating badly...n controlling his scream...manvi came to no his body is aching n craving for drinks manvi good worried put tray on table close the door so that his scream don't go out of the room..manvi goto him

m-virat...virat what happen...

but virat didn't reply..he is holding his stomach tears flowing from his eyes n sweating bdly..manvi saw this tears to come out of her eyes...she hold virat hands...

m-virat look at me...

but virat's eyes was closed tightly..her talks her pleading is not going near his ears coz of so much aching...manvi rub his hands...remove his remove from his foot.n rob his foot...

m-virat plss look at me..plss.s...

but no used he was cring aa aaa aaa slowly..manvi think for a whole what to do..to divert his mind...then something stuck in her mind..she look at virat scrraming slowly crying...manvi close her eyes...cupid his face in her palms place close her close place her lips on his lips lay on him..he is under her...virat open his eyes n saw manvi ..her eyes was closed n was nibbing his lower lips..manvi nipping his lower lip wildly so that he concentrate on something else..tears from from her eyes.she didn't realise the embarisment aftr the kiss.h...she just want virat to overcome his pain...aftr few mints virat's body relaxed he closed his eyes n njoy the kis...her strted kissing her as well..while seeing his body relax manvi about to brk the kiss..but virat roll n go on top of her...kiss her widly manvi close her eyes in acptance...both had wild and passionate kiss...they brok the kiss...virat look at manvi clear her tears ...kiss her forhead...manvi open her eyes...bot sit on bed...manvi was not looking at him...coz she is all pink...aftr their first kiss..that too like this(guyzz i forgot whether they kissed bfore or not...

m-aa..aaa..aap..thk hai(not loking at him)

virat looking at her smiling at her she cn do anything' he thought...

v-haa...thnx...

manvi get up from bed.not even looking at him...-aa..ap jake frsh ho jaiye...

virat didn't question toclear the clouds of embarisment he went to washroom widout questioning...

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Aftr sometime manvi was standing near the window looking outside...

Manvi was standing near window of their room 'maine q virat ko galat smjha manvi tjhe kya ho gya ta tu bilkul pagl hai...virat kya soch rhe honge tre bre mo...or jo abi hue ...agr time p nhi at...to pta nhi virat kb tk dard se chillate rahte...or vo(she thought about kiss..n blush red..bite her lower lip)'

Virat come out from washroom
Manvi turn she got stuned n taken aback all of a sudden

She saw virat came out of washrrom shirtless only wearing his lower...watr dripping from his hair n going down from hia face to his broad chest n abs

M think)-haye jiska husband itna handsome hoo dar to lagega hi..kahi koi chudial uspe doore na dale...

Manci come out of her trance saw virat too close to her
Her heart strted racing

M-mi apke liy towel leke ati ho

Manvi goto cuboard n pic towel from there when realise 2 hands hugging her from back its her virat...

Manvi close her eyes...tightly feeling his cold n wet chest on her back..she gulp-vo..//..ap ...gile ...

But virat press his lips on her sholder manvi's heart strted racing on full speed...she hold virats hand which is on her stmach...

m-ye..ap...vo...mi...(words not cuming out from her mouth her eyes was tightly closed...she turn n hug him tightly cant bear his torture anymore)

they brok the hug...manvi looking here n thre give him towel...n went to the table...where food is kept...manvi strted arrngeing food in plate virat look at her she is all pink..he smile at her n again went to her..pick her in his arms...

manvi got shoked n then blush-ye ap...i mean kkhana...(gulp)

v-tumhe sch mi book lagi h (raisinng his bows..with a smerk)

m-ha...na...ha..nh...vo..ap...na...ha...(she don't no what to say was damn embarised first thnx to kiss...then his broad chest...then his smerk intension...words not cuming out from her mouth)

v-mtlb...(smerk..he no wht is she saying...but he is liking her blush)

shok his head n went towards bed manvi's heart beat was racing...virat kept her on bed..manvi heartbeat stop for a sec...what now she thought...

m-aa.apko..bhuk nhi lagi...

manvi look here n there...

v-nhi...i no tumhe b nhi hai...qki jo maine tumhe set p khana bheja ta waha se khali plate wapas ai ti...(with lovely smile)

manvi look down..-to apne...

v-maine b kha lia ta...

virat kiss her firhead manvi close her es breath heavily don't no what is next...virat wipser in her ears-i no u not ready but i cn w8...coz i love u..manvi open her eyes...look at her lovely husbnd who is so understanding...yes ..she is not ready...she has to understand their new relations to the fullest then take the next step of their life...virat get up from bed tuk her in divet n about to go..when manvi hold his hand-a.aa.ap yahi so sakte hai...

v-mgr...

m-i..i mean...bed bht bda hai...mi koi elephant babynhi jo pyre p soungi...

virat smile go on his side tuck himself in duvet n again strted sweating...manvi look at him..n got worried...go on his side...clear his sweat look at him with worry virat lok at her...nodded nothing happen to him...

v-ac on kr deta hoo aj bht garmi hai na..(smerk)..manvi take a deep breath...virat pick the remote n on the ac...-good nyt...

m(smil)-gud nyt...

both fall asleep didn't talk coz of embarisment..both sleeping first time with each other on same bed ...as husband n wife


important note

guyzz my maine terms are starting i'll not update till november..may b aftr diwali i will update..hope u undrstnd...n dont forget to give long feedbacks about the update...n wishes for my xamz..😉😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
nic yr lov ur updteee
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Posted: 11 years ago
mnd divrt k lye kissy.. arre wah kya idea h.. 😉
but itne chote rmnce.. kya yr ye too nainsfi hue mre sth.. 😆
nxt updt jldi krna plzz
Edited by pritivirman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chal kamini achha khasa romance rok diya...lolzzz...it was awesome...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update he is giving time to her
and she is helping him update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update..
maza aa gae..romantic update..
damm excited fr next part
ha ha ha aaj bhut garmi h
loved it...nd loved thm so much
update next part soon can't wait...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update...
loved it...
continue sooonnn pleaseee
and ALL DE BEST 4 UR XAMS
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayeee yaar sakshi kya update thi
superb awsum and yesss romantic eeeks...
i loved how manvi took control of the situation ...virat was badly shivering due to wich manvi had to take d first step towards...to kiss him...wow i loved dat...actually i cud imagne d situation...
manvi feeling bad for doubting virat awww
and yaar dat shirtless virat ...ufff i toh love him lyk dat...manvi is very lucky haan ...
i loved d way virat pick her up in his arms...and d way he told dat he checked dat manvi ate d food given at the set...dis shows how much he loves and cares for her ...both r lucky to have each other ...and as far as love making is concerned...manvi is not ready ...and virat is so undrstanding dat he is ready to give her time...i just loved der bond...
manvi all blushing blushing and shy ...haaayeee virat toh gya aab kaam se
i m sure manvi will b able to solve d prob of virat ...i meant to say regarding virat's addiction
lovely update sakshi once agn ...
loved each and evry bit of it
continue soon yaar love ya take care
ananya
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pritivirman

mnd divrt k lye kissy.. arre wah kya idea h.. 😉
but itne chote rmnce.. kya yr ye too nainsfi hue mre sth.. 😆
nxt updt jldi krna plzz


hehehhe rukawat k liy khed hai 😆

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