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Apoorvarani

@Apoorvarani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

Amazing FF Dear!!! Read it all in one go!!! Please PM me for further updates!!!

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Apoorvarani

@Apoorvarani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

Amazing FF Dear!!! Please PM me further updates!!!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Oh it was beautiful...romantic and so well written I could visualise the entire thing ...

Loved the fairy light scene it was magical here too...I love the intensity and passion that came out through that simple season and lovd how,when he touched her exposed back she feels more of am electric mold than by the lights itself...

Loved him giving her the saree and the way he gets her to agree to wear or ..SRK's favourite colour...did I miss that she is a SRK fan? Was there something earlier about that...I am guessing you are ...he does know how to get his way...first I thought he was going to help her drapping it..

Khushi's conversation with herself always too funny loved how she feels when he walks in at lunch time...his voice was enough...

Loved the relationship Nani and Arnav share and how he tells her that he might have said something to Khushi and nani responds asking if he thinks she would like to know...very nice ...

Loved how Khushi reacts to nani in her room and loved how beautiful she looked...and loved nani for saying she was looking like her mother...and that Arnav would be pleased very pleased and will thank her...also loved knowing it was a saree designed by Arnav...loved how Khushi is totally surprised by that revealation...

Waiting to see Aranv's reactions ...just beautiful...sorry for the delay...but you know that I always eventually read...

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#904

still waiting!
when r u going to update!
i understand if ur busy :)

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ipkknd_gbdfan

@ipkknd_gbdfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

Wow! Amazing...loved nani Arnav relation

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

When I had begun reading this story, I was not at all prepared for the course it would take. What started as a breezy story about a happy go lucky girl and her boss turned out to be one with many different emotions simmering within itself.

Khushi's past truly was tragic, especially because of the lies that had been filled in her mind. And after the revelation of Payal's death, it was another blow for her. I did feel at that moment that there was something more that was yet to be told about Khushi's past, especially since Sukanya had entered into the picture.

Arnav's hot and cold avatars were quite perplexing, but it was a welcome change from the usual sad-past scenarios.

The relevance of the title did take its sweet time, but I'm glad it did come in the form of Khushi's note, which I had found endearing earlier.

It was funny that NK had whizzed past Arnav and Khushi and was getting married before them.

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chsweety22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

amazing story..reading it in one go..keep writing more stories..love the title😃

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Janay Mulligan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Your writing is brilliant and I love Arnav in this.

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Janay Mulligan

@janaykm52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

I loved that Arnav had felt that protective urge since he first met Khushi and recognized that feeling even if he didn't know exactly why.

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Janay Mulligan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#910

Ahhh...yes. The fairy light scene. I remember the first time I saw it on youtube, I had to close the laptop for a few minutes, my heart was just racing. Pure magic and you did it justice. Loved the "kiss you into submission."