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Posted: 13 years ago

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

INDEX

Thread 1

Thread 2

Chapter 20 (Page 1)
Chapter 21 - Scars & Souvenirs (Page 17)
Chapter 22 (Page 30)
Chapter 23 - Full Circle (Page 41)
Chapter 24 - Matters of the Heart (Page 52)
Chapter 25 - Of Zombies & Siblings (Page 63)
Chapter 26 (Page 73)
Chapter 27 (Page 84)
Chapter 28 (Page 93)
Chapter 29 (Page 103)
Chapter 30 - Start of Something New (Page 113)
Chapter 31 (Page 122)
Chapter 32 (Page 133)

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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

The update is stil sinkin in for me actually 😛

When Sneha enters i am almost smiling :D for me its like my entry he he 😛

i love d way she said "before drawing any conclusions you will remember that I and Arnav, both, had your happiness at heart"... this one line tht too from sneha made such a huuuge difference on d way Khushi perceived d situation! n those were d most genuine words from a best frnd..!

Ur portarayal of Khushi is something i adore so much guggu! She is vulnerable but rock solid... She has come a long way tryin to get away wid her fears..move ahead..but hasnt found her closure yet..she wil now.. n wil eventually realize that was wat these 2 wanted. her peace! apt characterisation... how she switches from bein vulnerable to strength... i like those subtle moments when u bring it up..

This incident has broke d line of formality bn khushi n Arnav.. wel it was long broken inside unconsciously... but it was there atleast superficially.
If someone can hurt u.. its bcz he is soo close.I am glad this happened.. al d while when he was explaining abt tht night.. they were getting into an ease n it was really pleasing for me.. made me smile😃

But i am more glad abt how Arnav reacted... u know he knew she may take it in anyway for wat he did...he meddled wid her life without her conscious permission.. but he is just in peace coz may be her closure is near... he isnt selfish.. he is just keeping his promise!

my fav moment is when they stood in silence... n it said it all... content! To understand silence u need to have a connect...comfort... these 2 havent even realized.. but they have it...beautiful moment❤️

my fav line "One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life.
That word is love." my expression after readin this was awww i am waiting he he he

but i have to say guggu i read it twice i liked it more d second time... dont know why..

By d way suspense in d end! nice one... curious now😃

Ur Cheapo sis😃

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1chilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

Now that everything is in the open they can move on. Sneha came and between her and Arnav Khushi has two people who care for her and will help her in seeking closure.

Now you have added a shade of suspense to the story and I am impatient for the next part.

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pri3love

@pri3love

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats for the new thread

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sansu

@sansu

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Posted: 13 years ago

hi!!!...

congrats for the new thread dear!!!🥳

res...for the update!!

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stories.1408

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats on d new thread.superb update.how r their past linked?has arnav's family got something to do with it I wonder.this khushi is so muchlike asr in masking her true self.plz update d next part sooner.cant wait for d suspense to unfold.

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

I haven't told you this before but i love how you start the chapters with a quote. I love reading them and obviously they suit the chapter to the t.

I think Arnav's outburst was a result of the feelings he has for Khushi. It was his protectiveness which made him concerned about her.

Khushi is justified in feeling vulnerable because she has kept her identity hidden all this time. It's not something she's comfortable about. And to find out that Arnav knows about her secret has made her upset.

Good that Arnav called Sneha. Atleast Khushi has her best friend with her now.

It's nice that both Arnav and Sneha told her everything and didn't keep anything from her. High time she found out what they both were upto.

The scene where she wants to be at a beach was lovely and very well written.

It is not easy for Khushi to forget her past. Such things can never be forgotten. The pain may be less but the memory is always strong.

Arnav's smile! He can see the change. He feels proud of her.

I think they should address their emotions towards eachother soon, after Khushi buries her past. Both have feelings for eachother and they need to talk things out.

So she finds out that he was killed. Now she would want to find out who killed her father.

Edited by IronButterfly - 13 years ago