~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ New thread link posted - Page 3

interesting...jab rey ko pata chalega toh kya hoga???waiting 4 that part...

Beutifull loved it
Amazing bolenge tho kam pad jayenge
Kriya ka sacrifise
But she would tell to rey he will understand
She should tell about rivaan
Update next part asap

awsome start...
Luvd d concept..
then cs was gud..
nd chapter was amazing...
Do update soon
thankx 4 d pm

A fab cncpt di.
Friends turned lovers.
Awesome
Gr8 strt di
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

wow...
new work di...
fabulus update ...

Amazing start...

i wanna read further ...I want Kria to fly ASAP...

luved d concept n luved d update cnt wait to read d nxt chapter ppllzzz update soon...:)

😊

omg... mania... itni sari updates 😲

but this one is bloody awesome...👏👏👏

vaishu was right... this is amazing 😃

kriya is single mother of rey's child...

n she did'nt even let him know that 😳

just to not disturb his career ... his dream..

she's an angel...😛

loved to see rivaan's bonding with swaron too...😃

they are too gud as her bestfrnds as well... 😃

rey is calling her mumbai... wow...

u knw ... after reading it... i'm just restless...

making story in my mind... that wat will happen next...😆

love... fight... pain... romance... emotions powerpacked 😛

only a few stories have that zeal to make me restless n think hard...

undoubtedly... u always make me do that...😉

this is epic... plzz update it sooonnn ... 🤗

Nice beginning
Awesome concept
Continue soon
Thnx for d pm