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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Damn amazing!!

beautifully written...

loved it

update soon..

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow mannu such a awsome concept yaar

i loved it alot

2 bff in love...dats intresting

n rivaan dere baby

hayeee i love da chapter alot

n sry 4 nt reading da other work as i m busy wid my studies n othr thing :)

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704537

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesome...lovd it...thnx for d PM

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wat to say super awesome,super emotional and super lovely...
Loved the phone cnvo of kriyaansh...
Rey lover her, shr also loves him...dey r just holding back...
It was d bestest update...

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Omggg
wat an amazing start
fabulous concept
m so damn in love with this story...
Bang on start
loved the cs and the 1st chapter

amazingly pennd down...
Its really beautiful

cant describe one particular thing...as i loved everything...everything seriously

update soon
thanx for the pm

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siliya

@Breezyexpanse

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful concept...

Awesome Updates ...👏

loved it

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Hey ..

The concept is amazing ...

Beautiful start ...

Loved it ...

Cant wait to read more ...

Cont. soon ...

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khushboo

@khusbooluvarsha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

a new ff...amazing index,character sketch and banner

coming to this ff...woowww

start is mindblowing

aur jab start itna zabardast hai to aage kya hoga...lol

but seriously,the chap. was fab

and the best part about this was their convo

the emotions were well portrayed

the way rey was addressing her and trying to convince her...

that was super cute plus emotional

thanx for d pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

amazin start👏

lovedd ittt😳

continue soon😃

waiting for d update😊

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

okay
after long time m commenting i know
but wow its osam story
i must tell u i love your all work
first arsha its really osam
i already stared one work on arsh but when i read your work i feel like ki min apna work ko app ki trha handel nahi kar paugi so abhi tak uski update nahi ki
as merey exam they to i hardly comment on that work
but m telling u i love that work
tish di ka work pehley pyaar ka ehsaas after that ur wok both close to my heart
after that marrige maker walla
osam
okay now this story
wowo osam best friendkriya r best friend
and then kriya hide truth from rey taki wo apna dream poora kar skey
kriyaansh ka baby
but still kriya hida this from rey taki uskey image na kharab ho
and rey he still lovve kriya alot
he care about her
both still best friend ka tag lgaye huye hey
feeling dono ko pta hey
simply i love the converstation
finally kriya agree to visit rey
dono kya hoga
jab rey ko pta chalega ki usa baby
uskey babay ko birth diya kiya ney
according to me unki life ek nya mdh legi ab
its just amazing m waiting
kab kriya rey ko milegi kab usey truth pta lagey ga
but tha way rey ney dhamki di na i was happy
osam di
ita amazing
update soon m waiting for next part
pretty please
update fast
megical kriyaansh
kya baat kya baat kya baat
AROMA_RUBHARU

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago