ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

The pace is good. Enjoying the suspense and am anticipating that it is going to go up many notches and become nail-bitting tense.

Really enjoyed how they all interacted over dinner.

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

😃

Am nervous as hell ... Selene felt someone was watching over her and following her ... 😲

and Khushi too felt that she saw a shadow outside her window ... 😲

The suspense is killing ...

Am just waiting for them to work on the cases together ...

and watch what Khushi's reaction will be when she hears about the latest case of Selena being skinned alive ... just the gory murder she is writing

for her latest thriller ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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faree

@faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

suspense is killing me btw amazing upadate and thanks for the pm

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Loving the pace of the story. Every update we discover something new linked to th case .

Your stories are so different from each other. Love your writing.

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

evn khushi felt she bng watched rt???

ds suspence s killing

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suwin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

loved this story, really interesting...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

Oh no, so it's Khushi's turn next!?

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aysh05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

I re-read the chapters... Creepy creepy shaym comes to my mind :) maybe I am over thinking it... But there is always hope.

Edited by aysh05 - 12 years ago

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#389

This is getting more and more interesting by the chapter. May I pls point out a typo to u. When Rita is talking to shukla, u said 'selena pursed her lips and glazed eyes etc etc' shouldn't that be Rita pursed her lips??. Not that it's a big deal, I understood it anyway, it's a credit for you on how we concentrate while reading ur updates!!!!. Thanks for the pm.