ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Wasn't the same shadow outside Khushi's window too?..Should wait for more details.

Your spoiling us with the regular updates, RB. I just can't seem to get enough everytime you update!

Edited by deereyedgal504 - 12 years ago

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

I could almost hear the crime thriller movie OST in the background while I was reading the update. In all honesty, I have not seen many people attempt something like this in IF and I am thrilled to read this as I am one who loves CSI:NY.

The attention to details is as always note worthy...I promise not to ask any questions and wait for the story to progress.

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Arnav is so passionate about what he does..Living,breathing these cases.

Any chance of two updates per day😉...the suspense is killing me.

I am reading the chapters again to see if there are any subtle hints about the identity of the killer.😊

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Kalyaani
I could almost hear the crime thriller movie OST in the background while I was reading the update. In all honesty, I have not seen many people attempt something like this in IF and I am thrilled to read this as I am one who loves CSI:NY.

The attention to details is as always note worthy...I promise not to ask any questions and wait for the story to progress.

Your team beat my team last night...after 5 attempts 😉

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drmj5612

@drmj5612

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

ohhh helll...

Selena was feeling that she is being watched..??!!!!

even she felt like a shadow like thing watching her, outside her window...

Whoaaa.. this is getting super scarier...

Shukla contacted Arnav 4 d same.. so, he will be working with him, ofcourse unofficially...

i missed Khushi here..

m wondering, what happens next...??? 😕

Edited by BitsArShian - 12 years ago

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Wow am so glad that shukla contacted Arnav and shared the information with . He confided all the information he had !!! At least now I hope they get break in the case . The story is getting grippier by the update :) Khushi also had the same feeling as selena that someone maybe watching her ... Hope they are not connected

PS : Penelope Garcia from "criminal minds" is an awesome and stellar geek . Someone like her maybe 😉

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

OMG Different and brilliant concept ! I love dark concepts ! Do Pm me plzz and accept my buddy request dear ! WiLL FOLLOW this FF !

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

Oh so I guess this happened before the dinner and his conversation with Khushi? I knew it- the shadow behind her window- the creep's after her now. Now let's figure out who he is. You know, her comment about his dimple being familiar made me wonder if maybe she had seen a glimpse of him in one of her visions?

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Philana

@Philana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#379

This story goes from being Dexter in one update to Castle in the next, and back to Dexter! There's an NCIS vibe for obvious reasons. And at occasional moments I feel like there's an in-house House in the story too, only not a Doctor 😆 I don't mean you're taking on from any of those shows - your writing has its very own style 😊 It's just how many odd connections seem to jump at me while reading this story, I'm liking it very much!

Alas. Too many things look unfavorable for Khushi at the moment, don't they? Girl's going to have her plate full, and Arnav's going to have more than just an unresolved mystery of two and a half years to sort out, if primal attractions have anything to say about the matter!

Edited by Philana - 12 years ago