ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Oh! And I got this very twisted way of connecting the murders and it shocked myself. Now I await to see if you can read my mind.

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Seriously can I go visit this place! South india seems so cool!

Ahhh The old dinner party! Khushi was hilarious! Ahahahahaha she got the psychic part down well!

I am so ready for Arnav to track this murderer down

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Amazing and fabulous update, wow loved the dinner party it was brilliant, finally Arnav and Khushi met and were introduced. Khushi's psychic skills were awesome, trying to guess the books on Arnav's nightstand. My god the murderer sounds like a proper psycho leaving no trace of himself, I'm glad Arnav is going to let Khushi help him. Loved there conversation on the balcony, they seem to get on really well, of course Khushi has to ask if she has met him before. Please continue soon, eager to read how Arnav and khushi work together to solve the murder mysteries. Thanks for the PM xx

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

So THAT'S how Khushi will figure out that the visions she's been having are of real murders and are not figments of her imagination.

I have never read an Arnav-Khushi murder mystery and this one is FANTASTIC. It has me hooked in just five chapters.

Great job so far!

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hello87_11

@hello87_11

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Great Update and interesting angle! :)

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Sandhya

@cindistan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

nice update...loved the mature conversation between the two...tx for the PM.

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

this is getting really interesting

cant wait for them to work together

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Arani_Kumar

@Arani_Kumar

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Excellent pace...khushi and arnav working together...can't wait

As far as the murder mystery is concerned I can't wait to see how you weave the reason for their deaths together and have it make sense

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

The most intriguing line is right at the end of the chapter...

Now you're making me want to drink coffee!

So Arnav and Khushi have struck up some sort of rapport...I hope she'll be able to lead Arnav on the right track.

The murders are so Jack the Ripper like...what is the motive behind them? Are the victims connected in any way or were the victims chosen specifically because of some trait each of them have...I'm still disturbed by the last murder.

Love thrillers - looking forward to see where you take this!

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-Reader-

@-Reader-

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

"The slight dimple on your right chin – just few millimeters away from your mouth is…very familiar.", that's very cheesy coming from Khushi – Didn't expect that!!

Arnav Khushi seems to have instant chemistry and they share same passion for solving problems.

FROM:

"It was simple dinner affair with a writer who was probably half nerd. What could possibly go wrong?

"Universe is conspiring against me."

TO:

"May I help?"

"Fine. You can help."

That's a lot of progress.

I can't wait to see how the CHEMISTRY between Arnav Khushi solves the MATHEMATICAL problem.