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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Awesome concept. Loved it. Cont soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
awesome dear.
loved it..
do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
deepu yaar seriously i loved the ss yaar sach mein as it revealed taani feelings so well yaar sach mein loved it aawsome update and plzz update soon ill be wating yaar!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwsummm di...u rockd !! Luvd it..d gang deserves it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Di!! Its totally awesome!! 😃 update soon and pm me if possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey its just awesum as always😉
n ya plzzz cont
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey deepu!!!
sorry for late comment. ...
actually I had exams so ...
achha now I loved ur ss very much. ..
bapre you come out with awesome mind blowing ideas hmmm...
like every time...
pls ise continue karo..,.
n ya dairy bhi likhi do ab kitana wait karva o gi...

pls update soon do pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg dipu I literally cried while reading ur update.. felt so bad for taani yaar... pls continue soon n do pm me.. n sorry for being late... :-(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh 1st of all so so so sry 4 d late reply...
xams time u know...
bt i loved it so much
u know maine same concept socha tha bt pen down nahi kiya...bt u did it really well mai aaisa likhane ka sach bhi nahi sakti thi...thanx 4 writing dis...
plz update next soon
n thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys...m back with an update...hope u will enjoy...i know guys m late...sorry...*holding ears*...

C H A P T E R 2

One week passed...taani take all care of agency and sam...sam start to see his mumma in taani...


One day...

At early morning...4 am...but two souls are silently crying...swayam(baby) and taani...both are feeling so lonely...both are lying on the bed...facing each others back...boths eyes are shut...they are remembering their time with karan and pooja...

Suddenly taani heard sobbing and she turn to see swayam...he is sobbing badly...taani put her hand on her head and said. "sam..."

Swayam heard this and turn to taani and hug her holding her belly...

Ta:shhh...dont cry sam...calm down...

She kept her hand in her hairs and kept caressing his hairs...after some time sam sleep peacefully ...

She kept him properly on bed and stand up...open her cupboard and take out a photo album from it...and open it...she know that she left them but still she love them...


"I see your face in my mind as I drive away ,
Cause none of us thought it was
gonna end that way
People are people,
And sometimes we change our minds
But it ' s killing me to see you go
after all this time"


She caress her fingers on photoes...that are of swayam and rey...

"Music starts playin' like the end of
a sad movie ,
It' s the kinda ending you don ' t
really wanna see
' Cause it 's tragedy and it 'll only
bring you down ,
Now I don ' t know what to be
without you around"

She remember every moment with rey and swayam...and her eyes become wet...

"And we know it 's never simple,
Never easy
Never a clean break, no one here to
save me
You 're the only thing I know like the
back of my hand"


She put the album near her heart and sob...

"And I can ' t,
Breathe,
Without you,
But I have to,
Breathe,
Without you,
But I have to"


Sam heard her crying...he wake up and turn on the light...

Sam:mumma...r u crying???

Taani heard this and turn her face to other direction...

Ta:no...no sam...m not crying...

Sam hold her face and turn her face and wipe her tears and said:mumma give me one promise...

Ta:kaisa promise sam???

Sam:that u will never cry...

Ta:i promise but u also give me promise that u will also never cry...

Sam:promise mumma...

Ta:ok now sleep...its 5 am...and when we will wake up it will be our new life...me and u...

Sam:yes me and my mumma. ...

Both sleep...sam sleep hugging taani...

After two hours...taani get up and freshen up...

Taani's dress...



She go in the hall...sam was sleeping...she dont want to disturb him...she told servents to make breakfast ...

Her phone rang and she go to agency...its some important work...


IN MUMBAI:

A new and big mension...named "TAAREY"... ...rey just one day ago shift here...he set all things...he never want that his friends do this...so he doesnt inform them because he know that his friends totally forgot taani...even swayam also...but he know in one corner of his(swayam) heart taani is there...

Hall...the hall is very big...all things are in color of taani's favourite...soffa white color with red cushions ...the walls of the hall colored with white color...everything is as settle as taani want...there is a wall ...and on this wall a big photo of someone is there...and she is non other than taani...
On the wall:


And there are some small photographs of taani on the wall...because rey want that jab bhi vo ghar se bahar nikle sabse pehle usse taani dikhe...

In the bedroom...

Taani love her old bedroom...swayam's house wala bedroom...so rey set their bedroom as same as her old bedroom...change is that on the wall there is big photo of taarey...



And beside this photo there are photoes of taani...

Rey was on the bed...looking at their picture...

Rey:"taani...kaha ho tum???plz vapas aa jao...with out you here everything is incomplete for me...see this whole house is decorated as u wanted...plz come back...i need u...i need your love...i want to hug u and just want to feel your love...plz come back taani..."

He stand up and open his closet which has rey corner...yes rey corner...last time when rey gone to taani's bedroom nothing was there except her rey corner and taani's letter...yes her letter...jo rey ne kisiko nahi dikhaya...he take all his pictures with him and now rey corner is in rey's no no taarey's room...

He touch all his pictures...then he take out the letter and read it again...

"m going...going so far from u all...u all nver understand me...m just going forever...good bye...and u know what guys me to aap sab se ye bhi nahi keh sakti ki i hate u...bcoz u never consider me as a friend...but bhai and rey...i hate u...aap logo ne kabhi mujhe nahi samjha...i just hate u both..."

And a tear drop roll down on his cheek...

Rey:i know taani u love me and always will...tum mujhse itna pyar karti ho jitna shayad me bhi tumse nahi karta...i will wait for u...and i know u will come very soon...my heart is saying that u will come very soon...

Just then his phone rang...its sharon...d3 team manager...sharon swayam shekhawat...

Rey:ya sharon...

Sh:rey...where are u??r u not at your home???we want to talk with u...

Rey:actually i m at my new home...

Sh:new home...???

Rey:yes...i will message u address...come here...

Sh:ok...

All come at his new home...they read the name..."TAAREY"...

Vi:taarey...ye kaisa name hai???

Sw:in his mind ...taarey ...taani and rey...

Sh:chodo na guys...hum andar chalte hai...

All:ya ...lets go...

Sh:vese rey business and sath sath dance team ki performences ...dono achhi tarah se sambhal raha hai...

Sw:ya thats right...

Vi:wow...his new home is just beautiful...

They rang the bell and a servent open the door...

They all enter...they look around and saw a perfect settled living room...

And their eyes caught a big photoframe of taani...

All of them were shocked...

Just then rey entered...

Rey:hi guys ...

Vi:hi rey...

Rey:kya hua???

Nil:dude...tum aaj bhi us taani ko yad karte ho...jo tumhe chod kar chali gayi...

Bh:abe ha...vo tere se pyar karti hoti to ese chali na jati...

Rey:i dont want to remember past memories...

Vi:we also dont want to remember her...

Rey:to kon keh raha hai...she is nothing to u guys but i still love her...she is my life...

Nil:dude vo vapas nahi aayegi...bhool jao...

Rey:u guys can forget her but how can i forget my life???

Sw:guys...stop it now...hum jo kehne aaye hai vo kaho...

Sh:ya...rey hame ek new offer mila hai...most famous businessman mr. Kapoor ki beti ki shadi hai...and we will get 50000 for performing...isnt it great???

Rey:ya...its great...

Servent came there with coffee...

All drink coffee and left from there but swayam stay there...

Swayam look at taani's photo and his eyes become wet...

Rey put his hand on swayam's shoulder...swayam turn and hug rey...

Sw:why...why she left??

Rey:i know swayam...u miss her...bas tum dikhate nahi ho...

Sw:kya vo kabhi vapas nahi aayegi???

Rey:vo aayegi swayam...aur kisike liye nahi hamare liye aayegi vo...ok chalo ab mujhe office bhi jana hai...

Sw:ok...

In newyork:

Taani reach at agency and saw his assistant rahul there...

Ra:good morning mam...

Ta:good morning...kya baat hai??

Ra:mam we have our agency in india too and we got a big offer from india's most famous businessman mr.kapoor...

Hearing india taani shocked...this wedding plannig agency is for indian families in newyork...

Ra:what r u thinking mam??

Ta:ok rahul...u go india and tum khud sab planning karna as they are very rich person...

Ra:but mam there is a problem...

Ta:kya problem hai??

Ra:mr kapoor want u there as u r the owner...

Ta:but...

Ra:plz mam say yes...its a big opportunity...

Ta:in india where??mumbai??

Ra:no mam delhi...

Ta:oh...ok...i will...(thank god mumbai nahi hai)

Her phone rang...

Ta:hello...

Guy:hello taani mam...

Ta:yes...

G:sam is not eating his breakfast mam...plz come soon...

Ta:ok...m coming...(to rahul)ok rahul...i have to go and india kab jana hai???

Ra:tomorrow mam...

Ta:ok...book two air tickets...

Ra:two???

Ta:yes...sam ko yaha akela nahi chod sakti na...

Ra:ok...

Taani reach home...and saw servent running after sam...

Se:sam...plz stop ...

Ta:sam what is this ???

Sam:oh...aap aa gayi mumma???but i m not talking with u...(he stand folding his hands on his chest)

Ta:(sitting down near him)kya hua mere prince ko???

Sam:your prince is upset...

Ta:why???

Sam:aap itni subah mujhe bina mile hi chali gayi...

Ta:awww...m so sorry sam but ita urgent...ok see i m holding my ears...sorry...

Sam saw her cute face...and cant help but smile...he flung his arns and wrap them around her neck...

Sam:mumma aap itni cute ho ki me aap se naraz hi nahi reh sakta...i love you so much...

Taani stand up holding him in her hands and twirl him...

Ta:i love u too...chalo ab breakdmfast karlo then i will give u a surprise...

Sam:surprise???kya hai???

Sam ask while sitting on the dinning table...

Ta:first finish your breakfast...

Sam:ok...

Sam eat very fast to hear the surprise ...

Sam:m done...now say na mumma whats the surprise??

Ta:ok...so we r going to india...

Sam:what???india???omg...finally ny wish come true...u know what mumma its my drean to see my motherland...

Ta:hmmm...so tomorrow we will going...pack your stuff...

Sam:ok...and he ran in his room to pack his bags...

Ta:sam...i will also help varna tum sab kuch yaha se vaha kar doge ...ruko...she ran after him...

Precap:taani in india with sam ...
Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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