Raizada and Sons - Thread 3

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"You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot fool all of the people all of the time." ~ Abraham Lincoln~

Raizada and Sons

This story showcases two areas of my interest, Politics and the serial IPKKND on Star Plus. The story bears some similarity to the serial and the due credit is extended, the rest I own, the content, premise and writing style.

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- Kalyaani

Thread One - Chapter 1 to 23

Thread Two - Chapter 24 to 37

Thread Three

Chapter 38 - Taking advantage / Chapter 39 - Master manipulator /Chapter 40 - Please

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A fist full of colour - Kalyaani's writing korner

Congrads. I just find out me second on ur page...sooo happy... So both seen Suraj there but don't want to let other one knw about it..cool...Suraj he is soo...i don't knw what i want to say about him.disgusting...i'm glad that Arshi didn't let Suraj knw that they had seen him..what was he thinking???

Congrats :)

Congrats on your new thread.

Hahahahahaha. They both are trying to hide the same thing from each other. Suraj, without even properly coming face to face with either of them, has managed to do something - make them lie to each other in the sense of pulling the other away from a truth.

Congratulations on the new thread! :)

An explosive start to the new thread... Arnav didn't reply her honesty in the last update and Khushi hasn't told him abt the incident with Viren not once but twice but the first is more grave and she shared the secret with Suraj although I am more than confident that no matter what happens Suraj will never open his mouth about that say bcz he loves her madly to harm her in any way but why Arnav dislikes him so strongly is worrying... Sometimes I feel Khushi would have been better of marrying Suraj bcz he adores her but then I think there must be a reason why a father would disagree to a proposal... I think this was the reason Arnav married her bcz her Dad must have requested him to, there must be strong physical attraction on his part but love I don't think so... But then again I might be wrong and this is what I love abt this story human relationships r always complicated and this story deals with the most interesting and intriguing aspect of human bonding so beautifully that u left us craving for more and that's I guess is the biggest compliment and achievement for any writer and u my dear have kept us enthralled since the first chapter.

i know sooraj is not harmful or his intention are not bad.. all he wants is to see khushi.. but man it is way creepy.. this obsession what he calls love is way beyond anyone's understanding.. it can not be just obsession.. as he cares for her and wants her to be happy even if it is not with him.. which is a huge thing in itself.. not an easy task... humans are more selfish than we pretend to be..

and YAY.. for the Hobbes is back :)

Originally posted by: farheen75

An explosive start to the new thread... Arnav didn't reply her honesty in the last update and Khushi hasn't told him abt the incident with Viren not once but twice but the first is more grave and she shared the secret with Suraj although I am more than confident that no matter what happens Suraj will never open his mouth about that say bcz he loves her madly to harm her in any way but why Arnav dislikes him so strongly is worrying... Sometimes I feel Khushi would have been better of marrying Suraj bcz he adores her but then I think there must be a reason why a father would disagree to a proposal... I think this was the reason Arnav married her bcz her Dad must have requested him to, there must be strong physical attraction on his part but love I don't think so... But then again I might be wrong and this is what I love abt this story human relationships r always complicated and this story deals with the most interesting and intriguing aspect of human bonding so beautifully that u left us craving for more and that's I guess is the biggest compliment and achievement for any writer and u my dear have kept us enthralled since the first chapter.

suraj is slipping