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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

"Happy Holi To You Too Dear"
Just read the prologue and First chapter...
The concept seems very different nd interesting..
I would Love to read more..
I have sent you a buddy request...so please accept it nd PM me whenever you update because iam realy Lazy person when it comes to Stalking:p

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow!!! this is so interesting!!
i loved the platform of this story..
and am already intrigued by the prologue and chap 1...
i am sure this is gonna be a exciting and thrilling ride...
looking forward to it... :)
and happy holi to you too.. 😊

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Wow...!! The writing ws impeccable... I ws literally transported to d scene...
d air of mystery along with arnav singh raizada ...oooh
Plus I like d combination of arnav n nk... am sure thy r gonna be fun...
And well time to get snpy.. update soon

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Happy Holi!! 🤗

hmm I landed in the forum n the first topic i saw was this and well the topic did it.. i had to read it!! :D

And well to be honest the prologue confused me...i am clueless about mythology for most parts other than for a bit of Greek stuff.. so well..

oooh found the 1st chapter interesting!! i am gonna stick around and wait for the update..
hmm Khushi cannot be dead already.., So is she the one to commit the 'perfect' murder?

btw I was reminded of this movie called Pathology.. which was about a set of medical students who was making a game of committing the perfect murder..

am hooked.. would love to read more!:D

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

happy holi

awsum updt

eager 2 knw hw d case s gonna b solved by our mighty ASR

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Like everyone else my mind too cant seem to get out of drooling over Arnav as a Cop/Detective !!!!

NK and La are his colleagues and the trio seem to make a formidable team.

Now who is this mystery woman who seems to have just dropped dead ???

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varshamaharaj

@varshamaharaj

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

just came across your ff now 😊😊 and the start was absolutely mind-blowing!!!!i love a story wid mystries..suspense,danger and love..it just makes things so much more exciting and intense!!!beautifully written...and arnav a cop??o gosh that's so hot!!!!i so can imagine him in that role😛😛😛😛totally hot and sexy hehe..i wonder whats kushi will be and what her role is here hehe..u got me thinking and curious..marvelous chapter..waiting for chapter 2 now!!!do continue soon...loving it so far..

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ooh inspector ASR love it
So the woman just dropped dead
Please let it not be khushi V

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Lavanya's description reminded me of the muggle report of the death of senior Riddles' death 😆
Inspector Arnav Singh Raizada
oooh this is getting better and ...better