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AnuMouli91

@AnuMouli91

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Ooh I like the way this one is going! I just caught up and I am loving this one. Murder, Mystery,and Mayhem. The rape of Persephone has an important role to play I am sure. I wonder who if the woman imaged herself to be Persephone and if so who Hades would be! And I am guessing the thunderbolt bullet holes are related to Zeus's thunderbolt. Italians, Greek Mythology and Voodoo? Intriguing! Great Story :)

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Omg! No exit wounds! My gudness! Mystery plus thriller plus supernatural! I m so loving it!
Awesome n fantastic!

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Voodoo? Woah. Woah. Mind Blown.

Italian Immigrant, hmm. Do I see vendetta somewhere in the plot?

Can't wait to read more! :)

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Oh! Bullets in the form of thunderbolt? No exit for the bullets, but! Interesting!

Khushi's entry is awaited too!

Continue soon!

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Dunno wat to say..u write flawlessly, and I dunno wats goin on but the mystical atmosphere u've created has got me hooked <3

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

I am loving the whole mystery!!!!

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Detective Arnav - Twiggy swoons and hyperventilates and almost faints :D

Thurderbolt? Woo, I like the sound of that.

And Vee, black magic! Vodoo doll! Aiyyo!

And whats with the mystery woman ?

No exit wounds.. Now Vee, I know you are bloody good at thrillers, so I know for a fact this is going to be one helluva ride. But please, update jaldi. I am scared and excited at the same time... the story is giving me the goosebumps! Update soon, darling :)

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Hi vee, though I received the pm way back when u started this amazing read but till now didn't got the time to catch up on it. Have to say the story that u have narrated to this point has left me craving for more. Waiting eagerly to read this mystifying story further. Thanks for the pm.

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Oh! A very intriguing update...

Initially, they thought that there was no exit wound, but, then the speed of the shot makes it impossible not to have one...so, the bullet is missing...I think it may still be embedded in the body...enuff with my conclusions...await your next update, with immense anticipation...