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cherry227 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love NK!! he shud have kicked arnav in the nuts too... hate him!!!

it doesnt matter wht shyam did with anjali... it didnt give arnav any right to do the same to khushi!!! i really hate him for that... khushi shud slap him!!!

i could not read what that poor girl went thru...

very eager to know what happened between shyam and anjali... a MU i guess...

i love the payal in this story! i wish she would be this useful as a elder sister in the show too :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Dear!!!!

I know I am late for commenting on your SS…sorry for that….Actually, I want to catch up with the chapters….read through all the updates….the story is fabulous…very well written….thanks to Rasgulla (Saiyu) for suggesting this SS to me. I just loved it….she is cute and naughty at same time...loved the first day of Arnav...loved the way you wrote their college days and especially chapter at your service…you wrote it very well….loved it!!!Really you had me on the edge throughout the story!!! So many emotions in the story with twist and turn!!!My gosh!!!!Hats off to you….👏

Last update was a heart wrenching update….hope he will not hurt her this time….poor Khushi cried tanks and tanks that stupid came now….when I read that Shyam saw a lady coming towards him and he knew who she was, I guessed it that he might be in London.

Looking forward for the next update…😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
Zehra any plans of updating this SS today?
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Posted: 12 years ago
This FF is one of my favourites. When can we expecr an update to this one? You have left us hanging with your cliffhanger.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..I read all parts in one go! Can't believe the way you write...its so amazing, yet effortless! You convey everything so nicely and delicately, but still leave a lot unsaid.. And that's what makes it so irresistible for me!
Great work!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i had caught my breadth completely till i read t update completely...
God...this part was scary..poor khushi..why t hell did arnav ever do this to her😕
i only hope things will be alright bet them...pls update t next part sooon...just want the suspense to open up😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb.he has really appeared.but he has to beg for mercy
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Posted: 12 years ago
To prove love is not about how long you've been together or how close or happy you were, it is in how many times you argue and reconcile, and found differences but still choose to be with each other.

Oh gosh! Where should I start with? The brother who was forced to see his baby sister crumbling to pieces everyday Or the sister who was yearning for the lost love? Or the lover that was left behind??

You have pinned down exactly how a break up feels, in other words, exactly how much it hurts. AND IT HURTS LIKE HELL! Khushi's pain brought tears to my eyes. To be honest, I had a lump in my throat, and I couldn't swallow it, nor could I throw it out. It was hard seeing her in this state, especially because we have seen how cheerful and lively she really is. Love really took a toll on her. She was dreaming about getting married to Arnav, and in the next moment, she is thrown out of his life! And the poor girl didn't know the reason behind it. But you know what, I am glad she ran away. This made Arnav rush back to her. And I want to keep the old school romance alive! I wanted to se Arnav flying across the ocean to get his love back.

And Shyam, the poor kid! He couldn't bear to see his sister in pain, and nor could he make changes to make her smile. He waited, like the patient brother that he was, for Khushi to come and share her feelings to him. It was hard seeing him go through this situation. He rarely gets time to see his sister, and I am sure he wasn't expecting this draught face of his sister!

But now that the duos are back to get their love, I wonder if the secret comes out. Anjali is in London too, and I can't wait for her explanation! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Seperation ho gaya, ab milan kab hoga?
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Posted: 12 years ago
god i had tears in my eyes through out the update...

such a pure soul she is... she is not angry on arnav at all? i would bite the life out of the person if someone does that to me..😆

neways... the best part is HE came... but i want to know his side of story too...

hope Anjali and Shyam would patch up in the next one...

please continue soon...

thanks for notification..

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