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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow is he really there.
Is he for real?
How could he question her back, if he is literally for real?
How can he ask her why she left for London?
What about what he did? He pushed her, she fainted and he did not even give a damm?
Is he going to repent?

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updatei feel terrible for khushiarnav came
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Posted: 12 years ago
congo on ur new thread dear!!!👏👏

came across your index long back...but just reserved to enjoy your work after my boards

so here i m ,,...read this story in one go...phew!😆
and others too!!
every expression and the mind boggling twists and turns were simply AWESOME!!
⭐️


looking forward to read more and more and MORE of your work!!

thanx for the happy reading moment!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww, felt so bad for Khushi. Poor thing, she was hurting so badly. Shyam was trying to take care of her, yet was largely unsuccessful. Hope he got some idea what Anjali's been going through till now... He wanted to rip apart the guy who did this to Khushi if he knew who he was, hope he feels like doing the same to himself too...

So Arnav's finally had a change of heart... Why is he accusing Khushi of leaving him & coming to London?? Isn't that precisely what he asked her to do leave him that is?? Didn't he say he wanted to break up with her, so what's she supposed to do?? Has he not been the one not wanting to speak to Khushi all this while, so what right does he have to tell Khushi that she just left India???

Please update soon... Want to see Khushi's reaction on learning that he is really there and that she is not hallucinating like before... I hope Arnav is ready to grovel to get Khushi back...
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was amazing
loved it dear
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
My heart cried for khushi...u wrote is beautifully...wow arnav came for real...don't forgive him easily khushi...hope he has a better reason behind his act...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Itz absolutely unfair if i hit the LIKE button.. But, Wt to do i am helpless..Zehra itz Super like from my side.. :) Amazing update.. Loved it.. Looking forward to the next part.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaaayyy u updated annnd i am super late in putting my comment...sorry...was really busy with a function in the family...I have so many things to write about this update which i so loved and brought tears to my eyes. By chance my husband was listening to the song 'abhi mujh me kahin' from the movie 'Agneepath' while i was reading the update. I felt that song is apt for this update. Especially from the part where Khushi imagines Arnav standing n the foothpath till the end i was listening to these lines...
Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa


This update really moved me...Khushi's agony, Shyam worried for his Chutki, Arnav coming all the way to London, Arnav letting Khushi know tht he will not disappear...amazing!!! Arnav's line...'toh mat manao na' was heartbreaking... Thanku sooo much for a brilliant update.🤗❤️
Edited by addicted16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi zehra
you dont have the right to complain about plagiarism. you know why? because ur work deserves to be plagiarized, it is so freaking good. i have always been a fan on your work but when u decided to move your work, never got around to asking you for the blog link.
lovely work lovely story. i love the way the love story progressed. it is so typical of arnav but i love his light-heartedness, his ease. i love khushi's bubliness and her maturity. such contrasts in them and yet they gel so well
thanks for adding me to the fold.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyy!! I posted a testimonal but i just forget to Congrats you for your 9 theards! 😊
I am very very happy for you!
You are Rocking and i hope you keep rocking this way till the End! 😃
Now update soon okayyy! Pleaseee! 😃

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