Arhi + RiMa SS:A Twisty Mumbai Safar EPILOGUE 26/2 Pg27 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

only 2 more parts.so plz update it soon.can u plz complete tied 4ever also?its a fantastic work.Jyo said parvati will b continuing it.I hope so


Tied forever is on hold dear...😊
i will try my level best to type...
do comment on Kyon kii...i will update both mg and arhi soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was on hold.but jyo said she is getting pms 2 continue it.so i read it.loved it.so i told her 2 start it again.she said she'll cont it.then she said parvati will cont tied,kyunki .i told her 2 type arhi-maneet ff also.but she said its very long.i tried 2 entrust others 2 cont it.bit no one had time.plz finish tied 4ever too.its too good.it'll b depressing if it gets discontinued.i'vent started reading kyunki yet.is d arhi version diff from maaneet version?QUOTE=pari_jyothika]

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

only 2 more parts.so plz update it soon.can u plz complete tied 4ever also?its a fantastic work.Jyo said parvati will b continuing it.I hope so


Tied forever is on hold dear...😊
i will try my level best to type...
do comment on Kyon kii...i will update both mg and arhi soon...😊
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

it was on hold.but jyo said she is getting pms 2 continue it.so i read it.loved it.so i told her 2 start it again.she said she'll cont it.then she said parvati will cont tied,kyunki .i told her 2 type arhi-maneet ff also.but she said its very long.i tried 2 entrust others 2 cont it.bit no one had time.plz finish tied 4ever too.its too good.it'll b depressing if it gets discontinued.i'vent started reading kyunki yet.is d arhi version diff from maaneet version?QUOTE=pari_jyothika]


Tied forever is on hold dear...😊
i will try my level best to type...
do comment on Kyon kii...i will update both mg and arhi soon...😊


i am Parvathy😳😳
welll...she had to chose between tied and kyunki,,,,and told me to continue kyunkii due to it getting more and better responce

its just on hold...will try to continue it...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes i know u r parvati.She had told me abt u.Pari is parvati's shirt form.Rt?she told me that u r an excellent writer too.jyo has wonderful ideas.kyunki is a very long ff.rt?plz update tied once u finish kyunki.its my request.i'vent started reading kyunki yet.is d arhi version diff from maaneet version?

i am Parvathy😳😳
welll...she had to chose between tied and kyunki,,,,and told me to continue kyunkii due to it getting more and better responce

its just on hold...will try to continue it...😊
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

yes i know u r parvati.She had told me abt u.Pari is parvati's shirt form.Rt?she told me that u r an excellent writer too.jyo has wonderful ideas.kyunki is a very long ff.rt?plz update tied once u finish kyunki.its my request.i'vent started reading kyunki yet.is d arhi version diff from maaneet version?

i am Parvathy😳😳
welll...she had to chose between tied and kyunki,,,,and told me to continue kyunkii due to it getting more and better responce

its just on hold...will try to continue it...😊


Just few of my changes in kyunki arhi version..😉 it will be updated mostly every 4 pages of comments


thank u,,,,i will surly try...to update Tied...

ps:Apri is Parvathys shortform...😉😉😛
Edited by pari_jyothika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i think kyunki got almost 4 pages of comments.so u can update now.u havent updated d maaneet version 4 a long time

Originally posted by: pari_jyothika


Just few of my changes in kyunki arhi version..😉 it will be updated mostly every 4 pages of comments


thank u,,,,i will surly try...to update Tied...

ps:Apri is Parvathys shortform...😉😉😛

Posted: 11 years ago
Updating...😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just came across your story,read it and loved it.
plzzz,PM me.
i very anxious to know what happened.
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 10
nice...
poor RK...
cont soon dear...
Posted: 11 years ago
A TWISTY MUMBAI SAFAR WITH Arnav & Khushi




EPILOGUE 😳

7 months Later...

Delhi-Shantivan


"oyy..Bhaiyaaji...kya kar rahe hai aap...jaldi kijiye...uss taraf laal phool...aur beech main yellow..."

Madhubala Rishab Kundra was excited...afterall it was a very special day for her...




"Princess...idhar aao...yeh caterers ka kya karna hai..."


"There comes her ever worried brother" she thought


Armaan Mallik was a mess...he had his shirt half tucked out...sweaty and ruffled hair...a phone in one hand..a list in the other...an ipad tucked under his arms...it was a very typical sight to see...but as usual his raybans were on...



"bhaii...aap chinta mat kijiye...Maine Hariprakashji ko bol diya hai..."

Told Madhu...calming Madhu to an extent...


"Waaa..." They heard a deafening cry in the hall

Utt gayi shehzaadi"...Said madhu...and then she spotted her Di-maa Bringing her little Princess "Meera" to her...




Meera had brought back all happiness to this family...like a blessing in disguise...



Anjali:lo...tum hi pakad lo apni beti ko...bilkul tumpe gayi hai...bas rothi rehti hai...

"Baat tho bilkul sahi kaha aapne Anju Di..." Came a voice...



He was Rishab Kundra...



He was a completely changed man...all thanks to the family and to a great extent..Meera...

Madhu Rk and Radha relocated to Delhi...announcing RK's break from the industry for a short while...




They already had an Ad agency running as well as a production house so no issues about finances..

Then entered Dr.Siddhant Kapoor..RKs Therapist...who helped Rk heals from bruises of past...




And yes...he was family too...as he shared his surname with his childhood friend and now wife Anjali...with whom RK shared the same Sisterly Affection...her charm was such kind

Madhu was now a happily married wife and mother...a PERFECT Mrs Kundra...

Now Back to the story...




RK:Madhu ke saari friends usse glycerin bulaaya karti thi...ab yeh junior glycerin

Madhu made that adorable pout...that made all laugh...

Then they heard another loud wail...but this time...it wasn't any kid..

But of a very familiar fully grown woman..




All of them rushed towards THAT room upstairs afraid if anythings gone wrong..


They all opened the door...and the sight in front of them was...HILARIOUS..


Arnav Singh Raizada...who accordingly kabhi SHER hua karta tha...and his Replica Aarav Raizada Kapoor(now adopted by Anjali-Sid)..was drenched in water..juice and sticky sticky stuff which was undoubtedly some tonic... And Now tiredly sitting on the couch with a "kahaan Phasa Yaar" look 🤣





Khushi Singh Raizada..now with fully bloated pregnant tummy was wailing away to glory while these two SHAITANS(according to her) were trying to phasophy her into taking medicine that tasted like Lakshmis Food(again according to her)...




She (as usual) had a full plate of jalebis and channe with her...

Her mood swings had been terrible..and all the Raizadas,One Mallik,Two Kundras and all Prakashs weren't able to bear with it...

And according to Both RK and Akash...their wives had been more human to them..

They really pitied Arnav...




And then came the very familiar line...(aap humse Pyaar nahi karte...)


The Whole family was Like AWWW...

And all got her into a bear hug...telling her that all are going to be there for her...

Especially her Rishu...with whom she had mended and created an inseparable bond with...and her Bhabi Madhu...

Arnav and Aarav looked at each other and said "what the..."

They both had become the bakras...and none came to them...

But why fear when Khoooshi's here (mami shtyle)

{Btw maamis gone to Amreeka to her patidev }

Khushi hugged them both and held her ears and said sorry..Aarav and Arnav both melted and then hugged her and kissed her check

The family went Pani-Pani seeing this scene...

In the Evening...

Shantivan was dressed up like a doll...afterall it was a very special day for them...

It was the BABY SHOWER of the Great Mrs.Arnav Singh Raizada..

A Lot of relatives...socialites...Celebrities..and all were invited..

Afterall it was not only India's Best Fashionistas wifes baby shower but also Superstar Rishab Kundras Sister/BestFriend and Best selling Author of "Mother of all Big Things" author Madhubalas Bhaabis Day...(yes..i desperately wanted Madhu to have a Profession)

First they carried out the baby shower rituals as per traditions...Khushi was dressed up like a bride...



First Naani came and did aarti of Khushi. He placed the coconut in Khushi's lap with the shagun she got for her and whispered in her ears "beta ho toh Shri ram Ji aur beti ho toh Sita Maiyaa".

Garima and Buaji repeated the ritual and whispered in Khushi's ear "Jeevan ki har Sukhi sirf tujhe mile..." and walked away after kissing on Khushi's forehead.

Then Anjali came forward did the same ritual as Naani did and whispered in her ears "may god blesses u with all the happiness of the entire world"

Paayal repeating the ritual whispers in her ears saying "Pagli...tumhe iss duniya ki saari duayen mil jaayen"

Madhu then comes forward and whispers "bhabhi, right now I and Rk wants a baby version of our Sanka Devi and next baby version of khadoos Laad Governor"

Madhu winked at Khushi and she laughed at her gesture.

All the ladies gave gifts and their blessings to Khushi. Khushi was very pleased with all the arrangements. She was in tears seeing the love and affection she was getting. She just closed her eyes and prayed to god to her family happy in the same way.


Arnav looked at her from far and smiled...

He gestured her to wipe her tears and smile...

Then came the surprise..as the lights dimmed...

Then came a projecter showing a photo...it was the pic taken duing Heer-Ranjha sequence...and then the song came...



Listen Here


Hua chaaron ore shehnaai shor

Tu meri ore chal nikla

Chadhi prem lor, O dil ke chor

Kar meri bhor, ab mukh dikhla


Khushi had the Usual O expression as she saw Arnav Dancing to the Tunes of this song...


Raanjhanaa hua main tera

Kaun tere bin mera

Rounaqein tumhi se meri


Arnav was joined by the other Guys Log...ie RK..Akaash..SIdharth..Nk and Armaan...


Kaun tere bin mera

Tera hai chaar chuphera

Kaun tere bin mera

O.. kaun tere bin mera


Khushi was overwhelmed with emotions seeing this...


Then came Madhus Voice..."Tum Mardon ko bilkul nahi aata ki humme kaise haraya jaaye...dekh lo..aur seekh lo..."


Listen Here


O mehfil taan sajdi te hilte-dulte tooh

Gore gore naughty-naughty round-round toonh

Punjabiyan de tooh, Sharabiyan se tooh

Gore gore nikke-nikke tere-mere tooh

Re repeat pe, beat pe vajdi dholki

Everybody does it

And you can do it too




All The guys rolled their eyes seeing Madhu,Paayal,Priya ( Nks GF) and Surbhi (Armaans...ahem... Friend)...

They joined them too...to shake that tooh...


Left right kare chain churaaye Tooh!

Tooh-tooh tooh-tooh tooh...

District mein hullad machaaye

Tooh-tooh tooh-tooh tooh...

All the boys go crazy when i shake that tooh

Tooh-tooh tooh-tooh tooh...

Aashiqon ki linein lagwaye

Tooh-tooh tooh-tooh tooh...



Then Came The Great Entry MAMIJIS BACKK..."No Dancshij combleete...bithout Mamijee "


She started to Dance...Along with Maamaji...




Listen Here


Saree ke fall sa kabhi match kiya re

Kabhi chhod diya dil kabhi catch kiya re (x2)


Touch karke, touch karke

Touch karke, touch karke

Kahaan chaldi bach kar ke

Touch karke, touch karke

Touch karke dil se dil attach kiya re

Kabhi chhod diya dil, kabhi catch kiya re

Saari ke fall sa kabhi match kiya re

Kabhi chhod diya dil

Kabhi catch kiya re


All had their Jaws Dropping seeing this...their bhola bhaala maamaji...😲


"Accha...agar aisan Baat hai tho humbhi apni Adaa dikhaaye Rahiyo" came a voice...

All hoots and Claps echoed the hall...



Listen Here


Oh shonduri..

Tomar monta diye jao

Tara tari eshe jao

Tomar monta diye jao

Tara tari eshe jao

Tang tang tang...




Tune maari entriyaan re

Dil mein baji ghantiyaan re

Tang tang tang...

Tune mari entriyan re

Dil mein baji ghantiyaan re

Tang tang tang...


All the Guys Did their Thumkas along with Naani ji...Khushi was having a hearty time sitting with Anjali...


It was time for the couple dance...It was a slow number...

So Arnav went and extended his hands to Khushi and asked her to join him...

Khushi tearfully said yes...


Anjali was also taken by Sid...

They started slow dancing...Anj-Sid,Rk-Madhu ,Armaan-Surbhi,Nk-Priya,Akaash-Paayal and also the great Arnav and Khushi along with other couples...

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Mere kareeb, mere habeeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


Anjali:thank yu Sidhartji...mujhe zindagi main nayi umeed lane ke liye..

Sidhart:ye tho sirf destiny tha...waise bhi tum maere liye nahi tho kiske liye ho??


They hugged while they were dancing...


Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai

Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai

Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai


Nk and priya was lost in their little fights and NKs forever toota Hindi...


Armaan was Lost in Surbhis Eyes...he was starting to fall for her...

Armaan:surbhi...will yu go out on coffee with me...Tommorow...

Surbhi blushed and nodded...



Huaa ameer dil ghareeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb




Akaash:Paayal...tumhe nahi lagta ki humme dobaara honeymoon pe jaana chahiye...we only went to lucknow...ab abhi bhji 7 months ka hogaya hai...

Payal blushed and nodded in consent...






Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera

Bas tujh se kaam hai

Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me

Yaara sab intezaam hai

Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile

Ya mile gham ki khurchane

Yaara tere mere kharche me

Dono ka hi ek daam hai


RK and Madhu were lost in each others eyes...

Madhu wanted to pinch herself to believe that it wasn't a dream at all...

Rk Hugs her understanding her unsaid words..


He went away for a minute and brought Meera with him...they took her with them and danced slowly to the tunes...


Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa

Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya

Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


Khushi had her head on arnavs chest as they gentle moved...arnav had his arms wrapped around her tummy...

Khushi:sab kitne kush hai na...

Arnav:hmm...ab sab kuch teek hi hogaa...aaakhir humaari shona aane waali hai..

Khushi smiled hearing that...arnav believed from day one that it will be a girl...even she had the feeling..shes going to be papas spoiled princess ...



Hua ameer dil ghareeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb

Tujhe chaahun betahasha

Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb



Arnav:I Love You Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada Dammit...

Khushi:Hum bhi Aapse I Love You Dammit ...



The screen Fades...


👏

Thank You People 😳


Edited by Paru_ - 10 years ago

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