Smitar's OS2:Finding Khushi#3Part15(1-3)Pg122(1/4)

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

so smitar will you update section three to night itself??

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: deepa.e
so smitar will you update section three to night itself??

Sunday!😆

Smita

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: smitar

Sunday!😆

Smita

Waiting...

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Visitor123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Thanks for the link Smita. Both chapters were fab as always.

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

The reason behind Arnav's parents death was not well thought of in the serial...It felt half baked.

I am happy to see Arnav search for answers in your story, with Khushi by his side.

I am enjoying your writing so much that I don't feel like writing myself. 😊

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

awesome last few updates! I love that Khushi is slowly starting to give in. All their scenes are so beautiful! Can't wait to read the next part!

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robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Jus read the update on blog!!

And as usual it was amazinggg!!!

Ek tou I get so annoyed after typin itna big comment it got erased since I m not very familiar with blog formats and all
So I thot I ll comment here

They find such solace n comfort in otger...u showed sooo well in those moments they shared in car!!

Awwwhh how sweet arnavz mom lrft sarees, kangans n sandals fr her bahuriyya!!

And even sweet wat arnav actually remembred all jis mother obsession n love for his and very well narrated then to khushi
Seems like he wasn't as ignorant n deaf to his mother's bickering for his wife...so unlike him...but still loved it!!

Chalo finally kangans are with their rightful owner!

Lol arnav with full haqq ordered A to be written in khushiz mehendi
And khushi didn't argue...great!

Amazinggg update!!

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: robinhood008
Jus read the update on blog!!

And as usual it was amazinggg!!!

Ek tou I get so annoyed after typin itna big comment it got erased since I m not very familiar with blog formats and all
So I thot I ll comment here

They find such solace n comfort in otger...u showed sooo well in those moments they shared in car!!

Awwwhh how sweet arnavz mom lrft sarees, kangans n sandals fr her bahuriyya!!

And even sweet wat arnav actually remembred all jis mother obsession n love for his and very well narrated then to khushi
Seems like he wasn't as ignorant n deaf to his mother's bickering for his wife...so unlike him...but still loved it!!

Chalo finally kangans are with their rightful owner!

Lol arnav with full haqq ordered A to be written in khushiz mehendi
And khushi didn't argue...great!

Amazinggg update!!

Posted part 15, Section 3.

Smita

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Fantastic update. I just wanna hug mamiji right now. It was so sweet when Arnav showed Khushi the things his mom left for her. Aww nani fed both of them together. Its getting cuter and cuter. LOVED IT when Arnav gave Khushi a bone crushing hug and a kiss that too in front of their families while poor Akash could manage only a single line 😆

Edited by risat - 12 years ago