vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10)

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itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

nice update

continue soon

and thanks for pm

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Nice start...~! Like the FB's...Maanvi asked for freedom thats strange will wait for the story to unfold...Thanks for the PM...~!

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Dee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Nice start , dear!!!

Waiting for further updates!!!

Continue soon!!!

~Dee~

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manvilover18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

wow nice plzzz plzzz update soon waiting...

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.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Superb awesome update shivali...👏👏👏...really loved it yaar...⭐️...hayee...virat police inspector......wow...haww...virat aur manvi alag ho gayee...manvi kabhi virat ko betray nahi kar saktii...zarror uski koi majboori hogii...😭...warna woh aisaa kyun karegii balaa...😲...superb flashback part yaar...😳...loved the virman scene...naughty virat...😉...so virat have been transferred to Mumbai ...interesting...really looking forward for next update...shivali...jaldi update karnaa...if possible...thank u so much for the pm...😊

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

wow shivali.. awesome ff yar...

the first part was full of emtional as well as sweet scenes..👏

i m really looking forward to this ff...😉

thanks 4 pm dear:)

do continue soon:)😃

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Nandita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

It was an awesome beginning 👏
Wow virat an ACP...hhhmm...interesting 😊

God knows what had happened between them...i m damn sure manvi would have been under pressure or somebody would have forced her or threat her to leave virat...otherwise she would have never left him!!!!
Do you know what i was really feeling bad when virat was saying that he hates manvi!!! 😭

I really wanna know what's the reason behind their separation...so do update fast!!! I just cant wait!!! 😃

And yes!!! The update was mindblowing!!! 👏

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

awsm start...virats condition is so painful but im sure manvi had her fair reasons too... the iktaara song was cool... update soon...

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hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

wow what a beginning,
dont know why but i have a feeling that manvi didnt betrayed virat, im sure there is something more, what virat doesnt know( at last i hope so😊)

thanks for pm

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

hey shivali pehle maiya saying sorry for landing up late here...

n now it was fantastic update dear... i loved it... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

that is called a sure se upar wala update... 👏 👏 👏

thats called a curtain raiser chapter...!!!! it was just PERFECT...!!!!

I loved this flashback to the core n it was soo damn cute... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Virat was in his room and getting ready and manvi came inside room

manvi: virat get ready fast else w'll late for.. (she stopped in between the sentence and her eyes gotten wide)

manvi:virat what is this (she said angerily)

virat: what baby (he said smilingly while adjusting his hairs in front of mirror)

manvi: this (she said pointing her index finger toward the bed. virat looked at her direction.he bit his tongue and tried to speak)

virat: woh..umm..manvi..woh

manvi: kya woh woh virat how many times i have to told you that don't create any mess while getting ready but you never listen to me (she said poutingly and started folding the clothes. virat came toward her and hugged her from back and rested his chin on her shoulder)

virat:arrey my dear wifey i always listen to you but you never notice that. and you know what when you get angry you loo more cute. (he hugged her more tightly and placed a light peck on her cheek)

manvi: virat i am telling you for your own sake. b'coz you are not a little kid, you are 27 now. and tumhari age ke logo ke kab ke do do bache bhi ho chuke hai (she immidiately bit her tongue at what she had just blurted out.by hearing that virat raised his eyebrow mischeviously)

virat: oh so you are indirectly telling me that you want kids. hmm great i think that's not a bad idea. so let's skip the party and make it tonight. what say? (he said mischeviously and placed a kiss on her shoulder. manvi blushed in a deep red color and freed herself from his grip as she know the meaning of his words very well)

manvi: virat..it..it's ju..just slip out of my mouth (she said feeling shy and her back is facing toward him. he grinned at her and pulled her toward him by waist. her hands rested on his chest and she was looking down while blushing. virat smiled after after seeing her flushed face. he kissed on the tip of her nose and made her look at him while putting his hand under his chin.)

virat: but i really meant it (and he winked at her)

manvi: virat (and she hit on his chest)

virat: ouch manvi it hurts (he rubbed his chest and pretended to be hurt)

all the very best for the upcoming chapters...

love

❤️ naina ❤️