vm ff: Hum Bewafa Hargis Na The Pt 15 PG 140 (24/10)

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Nandita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

Hey! Finally got little time to log in(still in a rush)...but I just logged in to comment on this story...just for YOU!😊

Starting from the previous update, finally the whole story was clear...damn that bas***d! You explained each & everything beautifully & now also in this recent update it was amazing but yet sad...bring back manvi soon!!

This story is one of my fav & I loved the way you had started & now the pace of the story is just amazing!!!!!!
Love you for this di!!!!!! Update uumm...how about now?😛😉

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floral

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

wow it was an awesome update i just loved it to the core of my heart please do continue soon and thanks for the pm dear😛😳😃

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

at frst let me say something about the less like, maybe they were so lost in the past theat they forget to click the like button 😊 or they were 😲 that manvi was raped😔

oww the flashback scene was just amazing,hope manvi gets well soon im sure virats tear will not only reach her cheek it will reach her heart, and she will surely survive,

by the way cant even imagine what virat will do to karan...

thanks for pm

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

Superb update Shivi!! 👏👏 Flashback part was so cute and sweet! ❤️ Manvi is one adorable sherni! 😛 But at present she is all broken :((.. She had a heart attack!! 😲 Virat's pain, guilt, helplessness, everything is beautifully portrayed.. My heart went out to him.. And finally she responded! Yaay! 😃 Hope she will be fine soon.. I so hope that now Virat will take care of her and pamper her like he used to do before their marriage! 😉 Will be waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

Ahem ahem.. I know that I have already commented but I again am here to say that ___________

I want virat to break each and every bone of karans body and make him look like a meatball... all his teeths should be plucked out and packed in a box... this big box filled with the most poisonous thing.. that is called karans teeths should be immediately sent to Amazon jungle.

And that meatball should be kicked out of this universe as it will be totally a sin to let the mother nature getting polluted anymore.

Your awsm writing made this affect shivali, I am feeling very much angry on karan and I still havent expressed what more I want do with him after all these... arghhh...

Cont asap baby because you know naa we love you... come fast... will be eagerly waiting...

I am getting quirky gosh.. do you know why ??

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shirhid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

awsome nd emotional update

cont soon

thanx for pm

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#997

as always its brilliant update
emotional
loved the way you wrote all their emotions... Described well
virat is feeling guilt bcoz he didn't believe manvi
liked the part where virat's tears fell on manvi cheek and she responded for that
hope she get well soon
continue soon

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Jannat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

res
Unres
songs selection was superb sisi
And it was great plus emotional part Shivali

The way u depict virat's guilt and his feeling toward manvi was splendid
U know what u r perfect in writing emotional stuff, i must way
I really enjoyed every bit of this beautiful and feels it from my heart
Beautifully portrayed and brilliantly written

Waiting 4 next part sisi and that too very early
Hope everything will fine soon

Sorry 4 late reply uttak beithak karke🤣

Thank u 4 d pm sisi

With love ur old sisi
🤣 🤗

Edited by Jannat94 - 11 years ago