Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 2)

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Phoenixrises

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Ahhh! Nice. This is definitely something different from all the stories i have read so far. Can't wait to see how they undertake what seems to be and I am sure will be a beautiful journey. Thanks for the PM and update soon.

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lika63

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

hey hi

thaks for pm

very nice update

gud way of thinking to show kushi as a handicapped.

vl wait for next update:)

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Mithila

@Mithikush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

OMG!What an update

Just loved it

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anera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

shyame is not gay he left bcz she limp
and arnav is going to say sorry to her i know it

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diya

@luckyarshi143

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Fantastic update...

Loved it...

It was an unpredictable twist to knw dat khushi is handicap n she has a limp while walking...

Eagerly waiting fr love to blossom btwn dem...

Thanx fr d pm...

Continue soon...

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

interesting twist...
looking forward 2 it...
thanks for PM...

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Interesting twist :) loved it loadz <3 update soon xoxo

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

This is the first time im commenting on your story!
First of all i would like to tell you (dont freak out) that i love you!!!!
Omg!!!!...i spent the entire night reading mkm 1...i just couldnt stop!... But then i was sad because it finished,and today i find out that your writing another story!!!! ...im just so exited about this!!
Coming to the story...wow you have set the background story perfectly...khushi has a limp!...that was not expected...but i guess it just makes it all the more interesting!
the way youv portrayed arnav as the jealous kid who wants all his fathers attention but cannot say it out loud is amazing!...you could actually feel all his inner turmoils and trut issues.
Please upate soon!...and pm me when you do!

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Mahima

@MahimaMV

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Posted: 12 years ago

#919

Gosh!!!! i never expected this twist...

U r awesome dear n u deserve this

Coming from the first:

Wow, in this story Arnav is nt an angry young man... I loved the description of his character❤️❤️

God, the face off was awesome👏...

Khushi tried her best to try a good relationship with Arnav bt all went in vain in the beginning...

They were just hitting each other's weakness

The last part was just awesome,sooperb n very Heart touching😭

I'm falling in love with this story more n more nw...

i really want to know how Arnav is gng to feel after knowing the truth...

I really appreciate ur idea...This twist is so awesome

Thank u for the pm dear😊

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#920

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved the update. Keep updating. Dis is such a big twist khushi is a limp. Its so beautifully wtitten and well drafted. Dis is really wonderful. Both hav done d same thing strike where it hurts d most. Lovely update. Keep updating