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pmohini1

@pmohini1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

this is sooo sweet and meanigful and gave me goosebumps and shivers on just how cute it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Swetyz

@Swetyz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Beautiful...
You are one talented witter who projects the emotions excellently...

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arshidee

@arshidee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wow ...!!!!!! 😲
That was an amazing OS I tell u ...!!!!
I really couldn't take my eyes off the screen while reading it... 😊
ur writings are really fascinating ...I totally loved it ...:):):)
not to forget ..thanks for the pm dea ...:):):)

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rskumar

@rskumar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

beautifully written...👏

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

hey,its a cute one. and ha,its lengthy enough to kill my spare time.

thankx for sharing. :)

<3<3

sweet,their love is sweet ..

<3<3

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trisasak

@trisasak

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I'm in love with you. I have a writer crush on you. It is true. I will be back to elaborate on that sentiment. Essentially this is a long winded way of saying...

RESWA!

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

uff! this was beautiful...

have been stalking for updates and this is what i get and i love you for it

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

This was so typically Khushi and Arnav ... 😆

Very cute ...

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

How come all your works are either results of insomnia or freak outs or something that you never consider to be good enough and they all turn out to be such masterpiecies that I cannot help but gush about them even though I'm supposed to be all serious and working on some boring spreadsheets now!?/ HOW Nafi how?!This is pure nainsafi I tell you those notes that you leave at then end and beginning of each update and in the PMs! I mean have you taken a good look at the stuff you write?!

Well enough about your nainsafi with yourself.. If there was one line in this one shot that resonated with me, that I felt captured the essence of this OS, it was this..

" like love-letters hidden in a locked drawer, a wonderful secret that only she was privy to, only she privileged to know."

It was so beautiful.. The circumstances, the upheaval in both their hearts because of it, and the love that shines through it all and not to mention that blistering passion that defines Arnav and Khushi. It was adorable, it was domestic, it was sachirine sweet and it was perfect the way they are with each other and no one else.

I fall short of words again describing how much your writing moves me.. I felt like I was intruding into their bedroom and spying on Khushi trailing her fingers on him, over that stubbourn lock of hair and Arnav pinning her down and telling her his plans and that smile and those few words that say much more than their literal meaning.

Okay I think I've written a big enough essay.. And whenever you want to freak out please feel free to PM me.. We can do it together! :D Love you Nafi.. Muah! <3