Arhi OS: When With You

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Denaid

@Denaid

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Nafisa, first of all, all the best... Ur moving out and r going to be on ur own... Scary, but adventurous. U'll experience a lot of things.. Some good, some not so and some down right horrible... Jot it all down to the learning curve... A path to wisdom.. So good luck..

Now, the OS... If this is what is called a product of a disturbed mind, I don't know what u would churn up when u r in a relaxed and complacent state... :)..Oh wait... But I do know... I've already experienced it in various stories written by u...

U have an inconceivable talent... Ur writing skills r remarkable... So never ever underestimate what ur genius mind can conceive... Loved every line of this one shot...

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

What's wrong with you. How dare you say this is not up to the mark?! That was just so perfect! It was just so perfect. Te descrption the quote at the begining it was just so beautiful.

You should check out quotes by Nicholas Sparks I am sure you will love them. Woulda posted the link to his quotes but I am on my phone so I can't.

But that was just so beautifully written. I love the bit about how Arnav would do things like shout at her but then wait up for her until she came to bed. That was my fav bit I went back to read that bit so many times. I woulda have liked that bit a 1000 times if I had the chance to!

Thank you for penning down such a beautiful OS.

Also all the best for you living alone if you have to may God give you the strength to be able to do this.

Thank you so much for the PM,

Take care,

God bless,

Jenna

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

aww that is so beautifully writen, loved it.

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kpk1002

@kpk1002

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Beautiful OS. I am sooo glad that you are back after that horrible plagiarism incident. Please keep writing😊

Thanks for the PM.

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distantobserver

@distantobserver

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

BEAUTIFUL writing.

Absolutely beautiful. Lovely language, perfect grammar, and brilliant emotions all together.
Great job, keep it up!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This is poetry not prose. Lovely story. Read it twice already, it is so beautiful. It is not just a beautiful emotional OS but the way you have described Khushi looking at her husband and her emotions at that moment is lovely.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wow just wow, this one shot was mind blowing and outstanding, written exceptionally well. Honestly from start to finish it was a beautiful read. Wow the relationship that Arnav and khushi share its just so beautiful and amazing, loved how you wrote down both there feelings and emotions in such depths, you are honestly an amazing and fabulous writer xx