||~Something About You~||#8 *COMPLETED*

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

god everytime a face an error wen i press like button anyways as always excellent. slowly both characters have matured...great flow...i feel we r slowly reaching towards the climax and the end of the story...it was a great chap. as always u, kkg and asr rocked. thanks...update soon soon soon.

Quote

Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

ahh the famous suna mein nay scene of ipkknd :)

the altered cholis, were they a self fish gesture on his part or a favour? i believe completely selfish.
good decision, i am with her.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

I love it when writers appropriate dialogues from IPKKND and use them in different scenes. I swear. It shows how immensely versatile you guys are as writers!

That haldi-cartoon dialogue had always been one of my very favourites from the show!

Coming to the actual chapter, Arnav and Khushi's little moments of stolen bliss are delightful but unnerving at the same time. I'm always fascinated by them and petrified that someone will catch them at the same time. I'm sure I've mentioned this before but that makes the story all that much more thrilling. Unfortunately Khushi is going to have to bear the brunt of the accusations and character assassination. She is a girl, that too one with a sordid background.

The only good thing is that no one will be able to get away with insinuating things about Khushi in Arnav's presence. And that might just be the push he needs to commit entirely to her.

Quote

LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I love their dresses!!

So for now this is enough for her? true love!

I like how u added heer-ranja bit

I wonder what her next step will be towards and how Arnav will react

cuz according to Sami this is it for Arnav