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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for pm. Interesting update, specially when you brought in the iconic IPK dialogues in a different setting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely and superb part
loved it
full of romance...
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...

loved the using of IPKKND dialogues..

Loved the way she applied haldi..

And thank god that she is okay with what she has..

If she pushes him, then she may loose him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update!! can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So beautifully written, I can so feel their love their longing and desire...that powerful feeling that has totally engulfed them...it's just so real and I cannot help but want to bless them and say I hope they both always remain happy and together...I love the clothes you chose for them...gorgeous, the words of the song were so perfect...

I love how she transfers the haldi to him and I love that they both are not shy with each other...
Would love to see how they behave with and around each other when their relationship finally comes out in the open?


Just awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ending was a bit emotional.. lets c what Khushi does now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update.. just loved it
aww.. khushi smeared haldi paste on arnav... so cute
love the way you describe saahiba and mirza love story and compared it with them.. brilliant
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the 3 chapters in one go and loved all the three. I really felt bad for samiya, my heart goes out to the poor girl. All along her life she had been dreaming about "best friends in love" with a happy ending theory when the reality was dead opposite to it. Though I felt bad for her but could not be less happy for our hero & heroine. I loved the convo between samiya & khushi, where both spoke about the person who matters most in their lives. The way arnav gave her, her own dose of medicines when she asked about the ring was funny. Its feels good to read the parts where you have used IPKKND's dialogues, it brought back so many good old memories.I am glad that it was khushi who applied haldi on him unlike in the show where he applies it on her cheeks. It was really thoughtful of arnav to redesign khushi's blouses, just to make her comfortable.
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting eagerly to know wat happens next..
pls update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting update..good going..nice...continue soon..😊

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