Torn Pages of a Diary...[Last Chapter - p 45]

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

part 8 - best friends forever...tweesha is unwell, one is giving co to her at her house and another one is attending lectures for themselves...how sweet...

ye naina to kabhi bhi apne dhun me rahti hai...

oh even she found someone stalking or gazing at her times...

liked how geet was possessive for her protection..

but i loved specially how sameet made her sister instantly to protect her ...Who is Andy BTW? i m really confused and how is he related to this.

i liked this sameer

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

i liked the end of the dream- came into view chestnut curly hair with bespectacled face

🤣🤣🤣

'sigh' poor Sameer. His girl doesn't even know about his existence and here he is hopelessly in love with her.

I m eagerly waiting for Naina and Sameer's first meeting. how it will go and how Naina will fall in love with him.

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

part 9
awesome dear...
nice...
Naina is getting dreams...
their fight was cute...
and Sameer is once again here...
cont soon dear...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

part 9 - omg...naina getting dreams of stalker ...

again andy...what you wrote about him in this part, it seems little scary...i have feeling that he will come bet sameet & naina...

poor sameer...he is in so much love with naina, but she doesnt know him at all...will they going to meet anyway.?..when will their love story will start...?

i always love the humor punch in your writing..

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Oh my! Its been such a long time for an update here... I had to actually recollect about what I read last here. But I'm glad you're updating these stories, as I never realized how much I missed reading them and especially your writing.

Winds of Change: Loved the start 👏 Made me smile. This Andy seems interesting, and somehow I feel I know who he's going to be further on (Just a guess 😊) He's in Goa ... wow I love this place ❤️

Tweesha and Naina are one of a kind... 😆 One drooling over players while the other on angry birds 😆.

So Geet realised what has Sameer's interest in this whole stalking business. 😉 Mission accomplished in coming for the match even after all the lies (or to say the partial truth).

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Challenges: 😆 I love this Sholay reference in a twisted form.

Naina and her not so private dancing funda is something I like in her ... speaks of her carefree nature, dreamer and also somewhat her innocence.

Geet is very protective of her and even didn't mind Confronting Sameer about it. But somehow like Geet even I feel he can be trusted. There's something about him (the way you've given him scope to express through his actions and thoughts) that makes me fell good about him in this whole equation.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Stolen Moments : Wow! Its sometimes so true that dreams and reality have a very thin line separating one from the other. Dreams are some distorted form of our subconscious trying to point out to us about some blur images that might have slipped our awareness our conscious distraction with everyday pictures of life that they get a let out only in a dream like state. I guess Naina is also living something on the same lines I guess. 😃

Sameer ... Hmm his realization and craving to at least be within some close proximity with her without being a hindrance of any sort to her or her even being aware of his existence is in a way making his presence felt and at the same time making her get good vibes about it.

Andy and his gyaan 🤣

Continue soon...