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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 1
Break-up
Part (a)

"Vicky, theek se kar!" spoke out Rey.
"Arey nahi ho raha yaar. Tu hi sikha." replied Vicky.
"Tujhse kuch nahi hota!" Rey spoke out as he turned to teach him a step.
Lousians : Rey-Vicky-Sharon-Simmi-Rinni-Nilesh-Swayam-Neha-Vishakha-Bharat-Amar are presently going to participate in one of the best Dance Competition - Footloose. They were probably known for only one thing or maybe two. Namely - Dance and Their Dosti.
***
"Didi" chirped a girl as another girl elder than the previous one twirled back. She had balloons and gifts in her hand which she was distributing among the children of the orphanage.
"Ahh, my baccha!" spoke out the other girl as she wrapped the previous one in her arms. "Didi it's not fair. You are going!" spoke out the cute little girl with a pout.
"Arey, sorry baccha. Wa kya hai na, is didi ke bade bhaiya ki shaadi hai. So didi ko jaana padega. Sorry!" spoke out the elder one holding her ears.
"Kriya, inko bigaad na. Tu toh chali jaayegi. Humaara jeena haraam ho jaayega." spoke out the head of the orphanage.
"Kya kaaki. Inko nahi bigaadungi toh kisko bigaadungi? Waise bhi, life without parents maine experience ki hai and I don't want them to feel lonely as I used to feel." spoke out kriya as she adjusted the strand of hair behind her ear.
"Now don't speak up like this. Accha when are you leaving?" asked the head.
"Soon. Maybe monday." replied Kriya.
"I see. ou are missing him. Aren't you?" asked the head.
"Obviously yes aunt." she replied and took her leave.
~*~
"Rey! I missed you the whole day." chirped kriya as she took her boyfriend in a hug.
"Me too honey." replied rey. "So what did you did huh? Sorry I wasn't able to make up." he said.
"Rey baby where are you?" came a voice from behind.
Kriya parted and looked at the back.
"Who's she?" asked kriya.
"Ignore na hun." replied rey.
"I asked who is she?" asked kriya in a stern voice.
"Kriya wo..." stammered rey.
"Why are you hiding it Rey? Just tell her it's all over." said the girl while kriya's head shot up in his direction as tears welled up in her eyes.
"Kriya wo..." Rey started to say when she showed his her palm indicating him to stop right away.
"Over huh? Then what am I doing here? Anyways, at-least I should have trusted sam and would have never been in a relationship with you. Anyways, I guess I'm returning back to Mumbai for forever." said kriya and left the place.
***
"Repeat what's going over here?" asked a shocked Swayam.
"Arey mere dost, planning. Planning ho rahi hai. You know, new student and ragging is must. No?" spoke Vicky.
"You know what guys, you all are just MAD!" spoke out Swayam.
"It isn't new Swayam. Ignore it." said Rey.
"Beta ji, tu GS hai. And ek bhi case aaya na ragging ka toh sabse pehle tu pakda jaayega." cleared Swayam.
"What!" spoke out a shocked Rey.
"New rule! GS ke hote hue no Ragging" replied Swayam.
"This is not done." pouted Rey and continued. "Matlab, Galti karein ye and sazaa bhukte hum. This is soo not fair"
"As far as I know, ek ladki..." swayam was just speaking hen Nilesh interrupted in between.
"Ladki? Kaisi Ladki?" he spoke out excitedly.
"Tu bahut utaavla ho raha hai?" said swayam.
"Arey bol na be!" replied Nilesh nudging him to tell about the girl.
"Want to know kaunsi ladki?" asked Swayam.
"Yes!" replied Nilesh and Vicky.
"Karan Sir ki iklauti behen!" said swayam and suppressed a laugh.
"What!" said the whole group in union.
"What?" asked Swayam.
"Karan sir has a sister?" asked rey.
"Ya?" spoke out a confused Swayam and continued, "Kyun, ho nahi sakti kya?"
"Nahi but we never saw her." replied Nilesh.
"Dekhoge kaise jab wo Dehradun mein hai presently? No Taani?" spoke out swayam.
"Obviously Bhai." replied Taani.
"BTW tum dono kaise jaante ho use?" asked rey.
"Basically, Taani don't knew her. She has just listened about her. Kriya ko main jaanta hun bachpan se. Actually uski mom and mere dad were pretty good friends." replied Swayam.
Soon the ringing of his cell caught his attention. A look at the screen on his mobile and a smile formed on his lips.
"Excuse me guys." he excused himself and went away.
"Heyii." he said while no one replied from the other hand.
"Hello?" he spoke out but this time he heard something. It was sobbing of some person.
"Kri you crying?" spoke out a concerned Swayam.
"Kriya what happened?" he question back when he didn't got a reply.
"S..Sam" spoke out kriya crying badly.
"Heyii heyii heyii what happened?" asked Swayam.
"I..." she found it difficult to speak.

Part (b) tomorrow

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Part (b)

"Shh first stop crying and have some water." said swayam.
"Hmm" kriya hummed as she drank a glass of water.
"Okay, now tell me what actually happened?" asked Swayam.
"I broke up with him." replied kriya.
"And why did you did so?" asked Swayam.
"Because.." kriya didn't found suitable words to say.
After she had left his place, there was a call which stated the real reason for her and Reyaansh's relation to be broken.
"Because what Kri?" asked swayam.
"He slept with a girl!" replied kriya as she shut her eyes tight and let the tears flow down.
"He what!" spoke out a shocked Swayam.
"He always wanted this only Swayam. I'm sorry, I didn't trusted you with it. I really am." spoke out kriya as fresh tears flowed down her eyes.
"Heyii it's alright. He didn't did anything. Did he?" asked Swayam.
"I never let him." said kriya as she wiped her tears.
"Kay then. I feel like killing him." spoke out Swayam as he felt rage empower him.
"Leave it. I guess I am shifting to Mumbai for forever." replied Kriya.
"Now that's something good." said swayam and continued. "BTW what's about broadway?".
"I declined the offer." kriys replied coolly.
"You what?" asked a shocked Swayam.
"Don't over react kay? Bhai ki shaadi hai and you think I will go to New York? Oh puh-lease." said kriya.
"Kay then. Bye." said Swayam.
"Bye." replied kriya as they both hang up the call.
***
"I'm not going to leave him!" said a girl as she flopped right beside kriya.
"Accha? and what exactly are you going to do?" asked kriya.
"Wait and watch honey! Come let's go." spoke out the other girl.
"Arey par Naina, where exactly are we going?" asked Kriya.
"You just wait and watch na." said Naina as she pulled Kriya with her.
Soon both of them were standing a bit away from Reyaansh and his friends who were busy passing comments on every going girl.
Soon a girl passed by and as usual they passed some comments. She surely was oblivious to it.
Soon Naina approached that girl.
"Babes watch out!" Naina spoke out.
"Huh?" said the girl.
"Hello? Didn't you noticed them passing comments on you?" said Naina.
"What the ****" replied the girl as she turned and went to those guys and gave a tight slap to Reyaansh.
"This is what you get when one passes comments on a girl." the girl spoke out and left from there.
Little did anyone knew, Naina had clicked a picture of that girl slapping Reyaansh on his phone.
"Picture Perfect!" said Naina as she gave her mobile to Kriya so that she can have a better view to it.
"You should go for photography" said kriya as she grinned watching the pic.
"Now what?" asked kriya.
"Oh hoo... now what kya? College website is waiting for this pic yaar. Chal kaam pura karte hain!" said Naina as she started on the 'good' work.
Soon the whole news spread in the college ans students do got a nice topic to laugh upon.
***
"Heyii guys." said Karan to the lousians (except Swaym. He isn't there.)
"Heyii sir. Where have you been?" asked Vishakha.
"Oh bas idhar hi tha. I'm busy in some work. BTW I came here on some purpose." said Karan.
"And what's that Sir?" asked Nilesh.
"Well there's a good news. I'm getting married." said Karan.
"What!!!!" exclaimed the shocked lousians.
"Why so shocked guys?" asked Karan.
"You seriously are?" spoke out Simmi in trance.
"Ya why?" asked Karan.
"Uh, nothing sir. Congratulations." spoke out Rey as he was the first ont to come out of the shock.
"Okay, so I was here to give you all the invitation for the marriage. You all are welcome guys." spoke out Karan as he left the place.
Soon swayam too joined the place.
"Heyii kya hua guys?" he asked as he had a look at the shocked faces of the people around.
"Karan sir is getting married" spoke out Rinni in trance.
Poor girls, this was surely a big shock for them.
"Ya, so?" asked Swayam.
"Tereko koi pharak nahi padta?" asked Bharat.
"Why will it affect me?" shrugged Swayam.
"Ya tereko ki. Kismat toh humaari phuti hai!" said the sad girls.

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Finally I'm done with the update!!!!
Check out the note below Kusha's post.
- Konpal

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Note
Enjoyed the update? I don't think so. It's not so good. Basically, it turned out to be crap!
Anyways, this note is not for this. It's regarding updates.
Well, Angel di's net connection has been cut so for around 5 months, she will hardly show up.
Maybe, she will show up on weekends and this is also not confirmed.
I know it will be bad but sorry peeps.
I don't think we will provide some regular updates of this work.
And a thing.
Since my 11th is going to start soonish, I doubt I will provide fast updates.
Sorry!
- Konpal

Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago