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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
awesum chp...
loved it
wow!!... we will get to see kriyam bond..
kriya n karan sir ... brother sister 😲😲
hmm.. intresting
update soon ..
do pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
interesting nd chappy 1 was great...
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya


Chapter 1

Break-up

Part (a)


"Vicky, theek se kar!" spoke out Rey.

"Arey nahi ho raha yaar. Tu hi sikha." replied Vicky.

"Tujhse kuch nahi hota!" Rey spoke out as he turned to teach him a step.

Lousians : Rey-Vicky-Sharon-Simmi-Rinni-Nilesh-Swayam-Neha-Vishakha-Bharat-Amar are presently going to participate in one of the best Dance Competition - Footloose. They were probably known for only one thing or maybe two. Namely - Dance and Their Dosti.

***

"Didi" chirped a girl as another girl elder than the previous one twirled back. She had balloons and gifts in her hand which she was distributing among the children of the orphanage.

"Ahh, my baccha!" spoke out the other girl as she wrapped the previous one in her arms. "Didi it's not fair. You are going!" spoke out the cute little girl with a pout.

"Arey, sorry baccha. Wa kya hai na, is didi ke bade bhaiya ki shaadi hai. So didi ko jaana padega. Sorry!" spoke out the elder one holding her ears.

"Kriya, inko bigaad na. Tu toh chali jaayegi. Humaara jeena haraam ho jaayega." spoke out the head of the orphanage.

"Kya kaaki. Inko nahi bigaadungi toh kisko bigaadungi? Waise bhi, life without parents maine experience ki hai and I don't want them to feel lonely as I used to feel." spoke out kriya as she adjusted the strand of hair behind her ear.

"Now don't speak up like this. Accha when are you leaving?" asked the head.

"Soon. Maybe monday." replied Kriya.

"I see. ou are missing him. Aren't you?" asked the head.

"Obviously yes aunt." she replied and took her leave.

~*~

"Rey! I missed you the whole day." chirped kriya as she took her boyfriend in a hug.

"Me too honey." replied rey. "So what did you did huh? Sorry I wasn't able to make up." he said.

"Rey baby where are you?" came a voice from behind.

Kriya parted and looked at the back.

"Who's she?" asked kriya.

"Ignore na hun." replied rey.

"I asked who is she?" asked kriya in a stern voice.

"Kriya wo..." stammered rey.

"Why are you hiding it Rey? Just tell her it's all over." said the girl while kriya's head shot up in his direction as tears welled up in her eyes.

"Kriya wo..." Rey started to say when she showed his her palm indicating him to stop right away.

"Over huh? Then what am I doing here? Anyways, at-least I should have trusted sam and would have never been in a relationship with you. Anyways, I guess I'm returning back to Mumbai for forever." said kriya and left the place.

***

"Repeat what's going over here?" asked a shocked Swayam.

"Arey mere dost, planning. Planning ho rahi hai. You know, new student and ragging is must. No?" spoke Vicky.

"You know what guys, you all are just MAD!" spoke out Swayam.

"It isn't new Swayam. Ignore it." said Rey.

"Beta ji, tu GS hai. And ek bhi case aaya na ragging ka toh sabse pehle tu pakda jaayega." cleared Swayam.

"What!" spoke out a shocked Rey.

"New rule! GS ke hote hue no Ragging" replied Swayam.

"This is not done." pouted Rey and continued. "Matlab, Galti karein ye and sazaa bhukte hum. This is soo not fair"

"As far as I know, ek ladki..." swayam was just speaking hen Nilesh interrupted in between.

"Ladki? Kaisi Ladki?" he spoke out excitedly.

"Tu bahut utaavla ho raha hai?" said swayam.

"Arey bol na be!" replied Nilesh nudging him to tell about the girl.

"Want to know kaunsi ladki?" asked Swayam.

"Yes!" replied Nilesh and Vicky.

"Karan Sir ki iklauti behen!" said swayam and suppressed a laugh.

"What!" said the whole group in union.

"What?" asked Swayam.

"Karan sir has a sister?" asked rey.

"Ya?" spoke out a confused Swayam and continued, "Kyun, ho nahi sakti kya?"

"Nahi but we never saw her." replied Nilesh.

"Dekhoge kaise jab wo Dehradun mein hai presently? No Taani?" spoke out swayam.

"Obviously Bhai." replied Taani.

"BTW tum dono kaise jaante ho use?" asked rey.

"Basically, Taani don't knew her. She has just listened about her. Kriya ko main jaanta hun bachpan se. Actually uski mom and mere dad were pretty good friends." replied Swayam.

Soon the ringing of his cell caught his attention. A look at the screen on his mobile and a smile formed on his lips.

"Excuse me guys." he excused himself and went away.

"Heyii." he said while no one replied from the other hand.

"Hello?" he spoke out but this time he heard something. It was sobbing of some person.

"Kri you crying?" spoke out a concerned Swayam.

"Kriya what happened?" he question back when he didn't got a reply.

"S..Sam" spoke out kriya crying badly.

"Heyii heyii heyii what happened?" asked Swayam.

"I..." she found it difficult to speak.


Part (b) tomorrow

😕😆😆😆😆ye kya ho rhahaiii😆😆
m tell u ur I is superb😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Amazing update...
Really loved it...
Tht bloody leech..
Poor girls...lol...
Aaj ke din sabko shock hi mil rahe the...hahah..!
Plzzz try n update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Note

Enjoyed the update? I don't think so. It's not so good. Basically, it turned out to be crap!

Anyways, this note is not for this. It's regarding updates.

Well, Angel di's net connection has been cut so for around 5 months, she will hardly show up.

Maybe, she will show up on weekends and this is also not confirmed.

I know it will be bad but sorry peeps.

I don't think we will provide some regular updates of this work.

And a thing.

Since my 11th is going to start soonish, I doubt I will provide fast updates.

Sorry!

- Konpal

hmmm sahi kah thik hi hai next time or bhi achi ho hogi update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Konpal, amazing update, and look what you did, am already excited for the next .. :D :D


Continue soon, mate! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Loved the update..
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Rey is soo flirt...but like him like this.;😉
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Poor girls! KSG is getting married..😆
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Please update soon..
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome update...
as usual kriyam bond was amazing...
waiting 4 kriya to cum to mumbai...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Superb update :-) love the KriYam conversation
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
AWESOME

SUPER AMAZING

LOVED IT

KRIYAM-AMAZING BONDING

UPDATE SOON :)

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