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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Awesome concept and Character sketch dear...loved it
Chapter 1:
Awesome start...They got engaged and Swayam gave her a note saying that he wnats to talk to her...awwiiee dats cutee 😳 Loved their convo it was sweet...good to see that they already started liking each other and wants to know more about each other...blushy blushy Sharon was a treat to read...Loved this super cutee wala update ❤️ ❤️
Chapter 2:
Amazing update...Both want to spend time with each other and get to know each other more...cutee...Swayam stayed back to spend time with Sharon...loving swaron's characters in this FF...They confessed dat they like each other...fabulous chappy...Loved it ❤️ ❤️
Chapter 3:
Yet another fantastic update...Swaron informed the gang about their engagement and the gang teasing them was nicely penned down...Shivam gosshhh...Swayam saved Sharon from that Shivam...Swayam consolled Sharon...and he was being possesive and all was awesomely written...and then lastly Swaron's convo in the car was sweet & romantic...Loved the update... ❤️ ❤️
Please update the next chapter soon dear... 😊

Thank you so much :) 😊
atlast some one gave a long comment... was waiting for one .. :P
but thank youu for liking this FF...
but about the update... um... i'll update it late i guess... tied up in some work... but stay tuned :) 😛
Thanks,
MiNi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter #4

No worries, if I am there…

It has been a month that Sharon and swayam were engaged, and they were in the college. In this one month swayam had become friends with the whole gang, and best friends with rey… Sharon and swayam were now growing more closer. It was like the new each other in and out. They had accepted to themselves that they loved each other but not to each other. Swayam was going to the canteen where all her friends and sharon were to be.

Canteen:

Sw: hey guys!

Rey: wassup bro…

Sw: wassup rey…

Taani: sharon kaha hai swayam…

Just then sharon comes to the canteen's door… swayam feels sharon's presence there, and says

Sw: sharon aa gayi hai, she is at the door…

Vicky: tujhe kaise pata?

Sw: main sharon ko acchi tarah se jaanta hun… I can feel her presence… just look at the door…

Everyone looks at the door and find sharon there, she was coming towards them

Sh: hey guys… tum log mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho?

Taani: maan gaye swayam…

Everyone was smiling…

Sh: guys am I missing something?

Simi then tells sharon the whole scene…

Rini: sharon, swayam tumhe bahot aache jaanta hai….

Sharon smiled at swayam and mouthed a "hi" to him to which swayam smiled in reply.

Amar: guys odel kal te hai(guys order karte hai)

Rey: aur swayam tu kya lega..

Before swayam could say anything…sharon said

Sh: ek black coffee…

Sw: she's right…

Swayam smiled to which sharon just blinked her eyes.

All: ahem ahem!!!

Sw: bas guys.. kya yaar…

Just then swayam gets a call and he leaves the canteen to talk.

Sw: guys main abhi aaya…

Rey: so sharon aaj ke kya plans hai…

Sh: pata nahi rey,

Taani: toh okay, hum aaj movie dekhne jaate hai.. okay?

Sh: hmm… um…

Vicky: are swayam ko aane de phir decide karte hai…

Nil: haa, uska kuch romantic plan hoga sharon ke saath toh phir problem hogi…

Sharon blushes…

Sh: shut up guys…

Rey: barabar, ek dum barabar bola…

Just then swayam enters…

Sw: I am back guys,…

Sharon asks with her eyes *what happened* to which swayam replies through eyes *nothing*

But sharon knows him better then that…

Sh*thinks*: kuch toh hua hai…

Rey: hey swayam, movie dekhne jaate hai?

Sw: okay.. chalo… but kon si movie?

Vi: wo vaha jaake sochenge…

Al: okay…

At the movie theater:

Everyone is waiting for Vicky and nilesh, they had gone to get the tickets….

Vi: hey, guys yeh lo tickets… but ek problem hai…

Sw: kya?

Nil: dekho, hume 9 tickets saath mili hai aur 2 tickets uper wali row mein mili hai…

Sim: so, see hum sab saath baith the hai, sharon aur swayam upar wali row mein baith jayenge… kyu swayam?

Sw: haa, no prob…

Rey: haa, tujhe kya problem hogi… romance karne ka time milega toh…

Sw: kya rey tu bhi

Sharon blushed hearing this…

Nil: ek aur problem hai..

Rey: ab kya hua…

Vi: hume jo action thriller dekhne aaye the, uski nahi but kisi aur movie ki tickets mili hai…

Taani: its okay guys… wo movie hum phir kabhi dekh lenge…

Al: hmm…

Everyone reaches the theater screen… the gang was settled together in a row, and three rows above were settled sharon and swayam… the movie has not started, swayam was looking down, as if thinking something…sharon was watching him, and was trying to figure out what was wrong with him… sharon missed that smile on his face after the phone call in the morning… she wanted to ask him what was wrong but then she was scared that does she have the right? She was her fianc but still they had not accepted their feeling for each other to each other… so she just thought not to ask him or pressurize him… just then the movie started… the credits said the name of the movie is "The Grudge" (Guys I know yeh movie toh bahot pehle release hui thi, but to fit my situation yeh movie was the best so…)

Sh: oh crap…

Swayam, who was still thinking, was brought back to earth but sharon's sudden reaction… he looked at sharon, and her face was like she had seen a ghost… she was looking scared….

Sw(worried): kya hua, sharon?

Sharon did not say anything… she just pointed at the screen… swayam was confused, that why was she behaving like this… he saw towards the direction she was pointing… now he got to know the reason of why she was scared…

Sw: dar lagta hai?

Sharon did not say anything, she just nodded… she did not like horror movies, she hated them, she used to have nightmares, when she used to see horror movies…

Swayam seeing her state, thought that they should go out, as sharon was not comfortable seeing horror movies…

Sw: sharon, lets go out, if you don't wanna see the movie, its okay…

Sharon felt a sigh of relief, but then reality stuck her, she thought that swayam must have wanted to watch this movie, he liked horror movies, and just because of her he was ready to sacrifice the movie…

Sh: nahi, lets watch the movie… its okay…

Sw: are you sure? Cause its okay if you don't want to watch the movie…

Sh: no swayam I want to watch it… its okay, I'll manage..

Swayam just nodded… the movie started, there were so many scary scenes, each time a scary scene would come sharon would hid her face in her palms… swayam saw this, he smiled seeing her antics… one scene came in which a girl suddenly came out of the blue in front of the hero, and sharon screamed, and hid her face in swayam's shoulder….

Sw: shh.. sharon its okay… dekho chali gai who…

Sharon still did not opened her eyes and was still hugging swayam's shoulder…

Sw: open your eyes princess…

Sharon opened her eyes still scared… then she thought wait a min.. *Princess*??

Sharon looked in those chocolate brown eyes, and blushed… swayam smiled…

Sw: wo chali gay… look…

Sh: hm…

Again a scene came in which there was some ghost moving behind the heroine, and sharon was shivering seeing this… swayam saw this and took sharon's hand from her lap, and entwined his fingers with her's and kept her hand in his lap, moving her closer to him… sharon just looked into swayam's eyes, his eyes said a millions of words.. his eyes showed care, love and everything, which was for her, only her…

Sw: no worries, I am here only….

Sh: thanksJ

Swayam thought that she is still afraid and scared seeing the movie… so he thought to say to sharon to got out,

Sw: sharon lets go out,

Sh: kyu, kya hua…?

Sw: sharon don't act brave, its okay.. chalo chalte hai…

Sharon thought,

Sh*thinking*: kitni care karta hai mere… par aaj ke phone call ke baad iske dimples nahi hai… I am missing them…. I'll ask him what's wrong…

Sharon nodded, and just got up to move out of the theater, swayam followed her out of the theater…

Sw: you feeling alrite?

Sharon was thinking how to ask swayam, what was wrong with him, she could see how tensed he was the whole day… on the other hand swayam was trying to figure out where was sharon lost… he tried calling her name twice but she did not seen to listen… swayam waved his hand in front of sharon's face,, and sharon came out of her trance… but she was shocked to see something… sharon got all panicky. Sharon grabbed swayam's hand and started to examine it…

Sh: swayam yeh kya hua? Kaise.. oh shit… main ne tumhara haath itni jor se pakda tha ki tumhe mere nails lag gaye… I am soo sorry…

She had small tears in her eyes… she could not even imagine to hurt swayam, and thinking that she has actually hurt him, was making her feel terrible… swayam saw the concern in her voice, and small tears In her eyes.. and

Sw: sharon tum ro kyu rahi ho… mujhe kuch nahi hua… stop crying baba…

Sh: nahi swayam… tumhe dard ho raha hoga na… I am really very sorry…

Swayam smiled seeing her so concerned about him… he kept his index finger on he chin and lifted her face up…he saw tears in her eyes… he wipes the tears with his thumb, and

Sw: sharon, rona band karo, please, I cnnt see you cry… please… mujhe tumhari aakhon mein sirf mera chehra dikhna chahiye… ye moti nahi… yeh moti about precious hai… inhe tum aise waste mat karo… okay….

Sharon smiled seeing his concern, care and affection… she wiped her tears, and gave him a smile….

Sw: chale?

Sh: but gang ko …

Sw: don't worry, mein rey ko txt kar dunga that we left… okay…

Sh: hm….

Sharon and swayam went to the parking lot… they were walking towards swayam's car, when she saw shivam there… he was coming towards them… sharon was scared of him… she started shivering lightly, only when she found swayam holding her hand… sharon looked at him , and he blinked his eyes indicating that he is with her, and tightened his grip on her hand more tight…. To her surprise, shivam just walked past them, and sharon sighed a breath of relief… sharon and swayam went towards his car, swayam opened the car door for sharon, made her seated in the car, and he himself went to sit in the driver's seat… the journey was quiet, none of them spoke, for a while… till sharon broke the silence…

Sh: swayam…

Sw: hm….

Sh: kya hua hai?

Swayam was expecting this, and was not ready to tell her yet, he did not want to upset her, so he pretended that everything was okay…

Sw: kuch bhi toh nahi…

Sh: mujhse jooth bolna nahi aata toh try bhi kyu karte ho?

Sw: seriously shar, kuch nahi hua hai… tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki kuch hua hai?

Sh: kyuki jab se tumhe who call aya tha morning mein, tab se tumhara mood off hai, main janti hun…. Ab bolo kya hua…

Swayam stopped the car, and

Sw: sharon tumhara ghar aa gaya…

Sharon stepped out of the car, and went to the driver's seat, and opened the door, and indicated swayam to come out… swayam hesitantly came out and

Sw: kya hua?

Sh: wahi toh main tumse puch rahi hun, kya hua hai, please bolo, I have the right to know okay…

Swayam was left with no option, and now thought that he will have to say it, or else Sharon might get angry…

Sw: who sharon….

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Precap:

Sw: I don't know how to tell you this…

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Sh: I Understand….

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Sw: I Can't….

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Sh*with tears in her eyes*: um, its o-k-a-y…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice chapter love swaron moments do update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
wow loved the fact that they care so much about each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great!!!!!!!! nice to see their care for each other... and ofcourse excited abt the nxt update to knw wat swayam's gonna say, especially after reading the precap... hope its nt smthng vry bad🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
superb update dear
continue soon
n thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mind blowing update dear...Awwiiee They had accepted to themselves that they loved each other...Swayam can feel Sharon's presence and Sharon also knows everything about Swayam, the way she immediately said "black coffee for Swayam" Aww such a cutee and adorable couple...the gang teasing Swaron...Gang be nah kabhi mokka nahi chodte hai cheedane ka 😆 Nil teasing Sharon and the blushy blushy Sharon is always a treat to read ❤️

When Swayam came back after attending the phone call, Loved the way Sharon quickly came to know that something is wrong, this shows that how well Sharon understands Swayam, Simi made a nice plan to make Swaron sit on the other row 😉 Rey teasing Swaron... 😆 Aww the movie part was cute, Sharon hated horror movies and Swayam was ready to sacrifice the movie for Sharon...Awww how sweet of Swayam...Swayam adressed Sharon as princess 😳 Loved Swayam care for Sharon and Sharon's concern for Swayam, the way she had tears in her eyes thinking that she had hurt him...luvved it ❤️

Sw: sharon, rona band karo, please, I cnnt see you cry… please… mujhe tumhari aakhon mein sirf mera chehra dikhna chahiye… ye moti nahi… yeh moti about precious hai… inhe tum aise waste mat karo… okay….

This showed how much Swayam cared and was concerned for Sharon, finally Sharon asked Swayam about what was wrong and loved the way she said " I have the right to know" 😳 Loved this chappter very much...Everything was so perfectly penned down...brillaint update sweetiiee.

Now i seriously can't wait to know whats the reason that Swayam's mood is so off after the phone call...And the precap was intriguing...Please update the next chapter soon dear... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: zb456789

Nice chapter love swaron moments do update soon
Thanks for the pm


thank youuu so so so much!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

wow loved the fact that they care so much about each other


thank Youu... :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ChaitraJoshi

Great!!!!!!!! nice to see their care for each other... and ofcourse excited abt the nxt update to knw wat swayam's gonna say, especially after reading the precap... hope its nt smthng vry bad🤔


Thank Youu. :D :D
stay tuned... Will update soon!!! :D

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