10/07/14 NEW part 38 page 44 :virman pehla pyaar story - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Intersting plzzz continue sooon i m wating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gud start

update soon

pls pm me
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part3
virat opens the door of virika and went in virika and viren jeevika turned to face virat
virika: kitni der lagdi jaldi nahi a sakte tha romeo
virat: a gaya me butterfly ab khush
virika:ha
virika opened her hands for virat
virika: romeo ajj good night hug nahi do ge
virat walks to virika and hugs her
jeevika:dadaji ne kya kaha virat
virat:wo push rahe tha ke mera liya kya larke dondna shuru kar de
viren jeevika shocked
viren:k..kya larki
jeevika:our tum ne kya kaha
virat:jo unki marsi vahi meri
jev&vire:matlab tum larke dekne ke liya tyaar ho
virat:ha
viren:im so happy
virika:kya ho raha hai
jeevika:tumara romeo ke liya larke dondana shuru kar rahe hai kal se
virika:matlab
jevika:matlab tumhe jaldi chachi milne wali hai
virika:sachi
jeevika:muchi
virat: butterfly ub jaldi se so jao
virika :gudnight romeo and good night momma pappa
virat viren jeevika:goodnight they all go to sleep.
meanwhile
swamini:kya kaha virat ne bahuji
vanshika chacha chachi shlock: bathiya na
dadaji: usne larke dekne se manna kardiya
every one go sad and upset
dadaji: bahi me mazak karraha tha usne hai ki hai
eveyone got happy and went to sleep


meanwhile chadiary house
everyone sitting in living room watching tv suddenly manvi sees that beeji is in deep thoughts
manvi:kya huwa bejji
beeji:no response
manvi:beeji!!!!!
beeji:kya huwa manvi tum tik ho kya huwa chilayi q
manvi:beeji ap kya soch rahi thi
beeji:manvi mujhe lagta hai teri shadi ki umar ho gayi ha to mein soch rahi thi q na ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Superb .. Waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
awesome start
loved the updates
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
part4
manvi:kya beeji
beeji:q na tumhara liya larka dundana shuru kar de...tumhe ko ethraz he beta
manvi:nahi beeji ap jesa theek sumjje wesa hi hoga
beeji:thank u beta
daabu:manvi di ap shaadi karne wali hai
beeji:hai lekin mujhe use pehle larka dundan hoga
manvi:blushing beeji mein sona ja rahi hun hood night
pinky chachi:shadi ki baat sun kar sharma gaye.
next morning chodairy house
6pm
manvi wakes up as the ray of sun hits her face she strechs and gets out of bed and quickly freshs up and gets dressed and walked downstairs
maanvi:sath baje gaye jaldi chai ban letyi hu ise pehle ke koi jag ja
manvi makes tea as she finished fill the cups with tea beeji and pink walk in kichen
beeji:good morning manvi
manvi:good morning beeji our chachi
pinky:manvi tun q chai banye mein bandethi
manvi:chachi ap banye ya me bano ek hi bath hai
pinky:manvi tu bahar ja ke table tyaar kar mein breakfast ban dethi hu
manvi:ok
manvi prepares the table wen the bell rings dhe goes and open the.door
manvi:heer khushi arohi tum log itni suba suba
heer:math puch manvi kabse sun rahi hu inki.bathe bore ho gaye
khushi and arohis mouth open in shock
manvi laughs at there faces
khushi: tu q haz rahi ha chup kar!!!
manvi stops laughing
khushi:or tu arohi tujhe mein abhi bathai hu
she ran after heer like a cat runs after a mouse
they all went in the house
beeji: ye shore kesa hai kaun aya hai
beeji came in room.and saw khushi and heer and smiled at looking at them


sorry can't pm it doesn't let me and by the next update in 20 minutes or so
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Just read all parts its awesome!! Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ths is so good plz cnt sn nd pm me
Posted: 12 years ago
#19
qasam se ur 20 minute are so long
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#20
part5
ek minute ek minute pehle ye to batho huwa kya
khushi:mein bathathi hu
heer:plez tu mathe batha tu shru ho gayi to band nahi kare hi
khusho:kya kaha!!!
heer:wahi jo tune suna
manvi:heer batha na
heer:manvi kya he na arohi ko koi larka dekne kal aya tha or kal roka.fix huwa hai
manvi suddenly remebered about wat beeji said yesterday
manvi:larke ka kya name hai
arohi:um...ar...arjun
khushi:dekhe sharma kese rahi hai
arohi: tumhe kal mera gar ana hai ma na bulaya hai
manvi:tekh hai hum be dekhe lenge hamar hona wala jiaji ko
beeji walks in
beeji:wase hum be manvi ke liya larka dundraha hai
all three look at thet shocked
all three:pehle q.nahi bathaya
manvi:larka dundraha hai mila nahi so bathani ki kya bath hai. they left


vadhera house
virat wakes up in the morning at 7o'clock and gets ready for breakfast
he goes down stair
everyone was on the table
they had thee breakfas and everyone left for there work only virika and viren jeev and virat in living from
virika was by jeevika play wen suddenly she remembers somthing and walks towards virat
virika: romeo romeo she screams while walking towards him
virat picks her up and makes her sit in his lap
virika:romeo tume yaad hai tumne kal kya promise kiya tha
virat:nahi kya
virika starts to have tears in her eyes virat cant see her like this
virat:butterfly mathe ro mujhe.yaad doll lani hai ajj plez ro mathe
virika:hugs virat and says thank u
virat: ab chalo jaldi chale
virika : hai chala
they get two doll for her

sorry i keep getting disturbed so takes time but wil update in few minute i written another part just need to post it

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