One Last Betrayal: Arshi ff (NEW AUTHOR'S NOTE! 8/4. Page 157)

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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

What else is really left anyway... He has hurt her in every possible way... He could have hit her and left her rather than doing all this to her... God how low can he get?????
payal is dimwit I think... It is clear as morn sky tat she isnt well but still she goes and asks her... If I was her I wouldnt hav let her go into tat monster's den at all...
lovely update yaar... Every part manages to bring out the worst in me...
happy writing deary

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abika

@abika

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

nice porr khushi she has to suffer so much hope arnav finds truth soon he should regret very much

pooe khushi

loved it

thnaks ofr pm

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richa1792

@richa1792

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

I love you damn it.!!

And your story.!
Its amazing.!!!!😃

I can't wait to see Arnav on his knees, burning in a hell of his own making.!!

He was ready to hit her.! Yes he stopped.

But he did raise his hand to hit her.!!

I am disgusted with him right now.!!

Oh yeah, and i don't normally do this, but with you i will.!!

I'm gonna stalk you and beg for a fast update.

Please, please, pretty please???

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Jus amazin...wow..hats off to u...plz plz plz pm me weneva u updt...

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Another emotion filled update. You write really well

Edited by Vidhi_K - 12 years ago

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Did it really happen?!!! He was about to punch her!! What more is left? :/
very well written.
I m really hopeful about NK and payal s effort.

I was so scared when khushi was entering her room,i actually thought he'd again use sex as a medium to hurt her..but well,he tried to hit her! :/ how much more he'd stoop!

I'd request you to update the title of this ff too whenever you post a new chapter..by writing the chapter number which you update..that would make it easier for all to know that you've updated.

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horizon123

@horizon123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

very intense and emotional update, loved it😊

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Hitting her was only left in ASR to hurt khushi and now he is accomplishing that too...

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

This work is really amazing .. Waiting for next update

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Heyyy

That was amazing! I love this FF coz I know that arnav's repentance is going to follow. Khushi should walk out of his life, he should realize the truth and he should have an agonizing repentance..He really should suffer for hurting her so..And she shouldn't forgive him easily.. Only after a lot of suffering and a real redemption should she forgive him!!

I have buddied you. Please PM wen u update and please update soon!

Edited by serendipitylove - 12 years ago