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dima_a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

amazing update...Khushi happy that she is giving a chance to her heart ..she really love him very much and can't see another woman around him..but i afraid she give herself some hope that he will change his mind in future because of the hope anjeli give it to her by mistake...not easy to deal with arnav and i think khushi will be happy with him for sometime ...but when she want more he will break her heart...waiting for next update

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pheonix24

@pheonix24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Rasgulla_sp provided me the link..and I am here...she was right,when she said this was the dreamiest story that she has read on IF...wonderful storyline...and I love the way you have shaped your characters...Do accept my buddy request...would love to keep myself updated,with this wonderful story..

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Kripa,

Two brilliant updates...loved the way you have expressed their emotional bonding..both were desperate to be with each other but were not being able to express...glad that Khushi took Payal's advice and decided to give it a go...it is always worth to live the moment than regretting later...

I am in love with this matured Arnav..like Khushi even I find him so sexy even when he is angry..you have painted him so well...just fell in love with him when despite of the urge to be with her he asked her to think over it..what a perfect man...this Arnav I find with all his follies an epitome of a perfect lover..

Looking forward to their journey together but then then your prologuie always flashes in my mind...what must have happened???? too many questions..well I leave that to you and just enjoy the updates...

plzzz update soon...

Edited by apara_loves_IPK - 12 years ago

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

S0 they have decided t0 date, can 0nly pray f0r the relati0nship

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

is it too early to demand updates..

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Okay so basically, hello mein aa gayi!

So the update makes the inner romantic in me curdle up in happiness and go "YAY YAY YAY" i can't wait for the date either 😆 😉

I do have a little complaint though - Akash. I see a lot of people like him, though, so let me go into a mini rant.

The thing with people, if they are level headed, mature and sensible human beings - is that they will take criticism very well, even try to improve themselves on the basis of that criticism.

But BUT, if you ever say ONE word about their friends/family - they will fight you and may actually STOP talking to you. What people don't realize is that before they are YOUR friends/family, they happen to be human beings and NO human being is perfect.

Its actually ludriculous how people tend to go off the deep end and start doing shit. I understand if the person who was criticizing your friend/family actually had no base and was bitching shit just for the heck of it, yeah in that case slam them up so that they NEVER do that again. But if the peson is actually saying the TRUTH about your friend/family and makes valid points which even you know they can improve upon, then doesn't it make more sense to actually LISTEN to what the person says and maybse sit down with the particular friend/family member and TALK to them about this so they can work towards it being better?

I mean if you love them SO MUCH, then shouldn't you have their best interests at heart?

I don't know WHAT other people think, but it doesn't make sense to me when people start shouting like hooligans when friends and family are concerned.

Similarly with Akash, he KNOWS Payal has a valid point when his sister is concerned, and yet asks her to keep him away from it. If you love your sister so much, ask her to fix this little glitch in her otherwise amazing personality?

But seriously though, mujhe is update se ILU dammit hai 😳

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Read this story at Sayieda's recommendation and I should say its absolutely wonderful!

The way you have dealt with the characters is fabulous.

The pace of the story is brisk and the emotional analysis of the characters is fabulous!

Loved it!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

I read this story at rasgulla's recommendation and I am so glad that I did. It's simply amazing! Brilliant! Loved it to bits. I read it all in one go! There my Sunday gone! But no regrets buddy! Pls pls send me a pm when u update next, can't wait to read abt their date! Thanks.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

hey, absolutely loved the story... read it after rasgullas recommndation...and i must say u r one fab writer...!
the story is very realistic...
its easy to imagine the charecters as they seem much real... there is a calmness in it throughout...
i especially liked the open nature both of them flaunts..and the passion they share is outstndng..and yes payal is really a very solid character n love her for her straightheadednss...
am glad i read the story...it was an absolute treat..