Sunshine & Moonlight # 2 ~Part 31 Pg 25~ - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
khushi's thoughts n feelings were very well described... poor thing... she is still not aware that she cannot escape the ASR charm... you had written it well...please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: _disha_

Oh such a lovely update !!


This is one thing i like about this story that all the characters whether La, Payal, Akash and Nanhe have been given a brain unlike the show !!😆

Payal is such a sweetheart and played her big sister role to the "T" !

I am feeling kind of tense for Khushi ,,,, she is so innocent and ignorant of these blossoming feelings of love how in the world is she going to handle ASR !!

mmm... good point _disha_...
you are so right in feeling tense for Khushi...
wait and see if he destroys her innocence with his pig headedness
or
if she makes his world brighter by cleaning it with her innocence...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: aayt

both parts 23 24 were pretty good

he n khushi completely opposite they r attracted towards each other
but the difference is big
also khushi'd be little more mature she is dr dealing several people every day
like ji with everyone little immature
loved it😊

It's not that she doesn't understand Love and infatuation..
it's not that she didn't dream about getting married and falling in love... but that's just it... they were always dreams in reality she hadn't had any such feelings till she met him...
and when she did start having those feelings she is just unsure what path to take..it's no longer teenage... it's grown up world and any actions will have consequences and she is mature enough to understand that and that's why she is willing to let go of her feelings..
her talk with payal is just her looking for a way to assure herself that she is doing the right thing...
hope that clears her character a little..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Hi, I realized I might need to clarify Khushi's thoughts a little more.
It's not that she doesn't understand Love and infatuation..
it's not that she didn't dream about getting married and falling in love...
actually she loves to dream about her perfect wedding and a husband who she adores...
But that's just it... they were always dreams in reality she hadn't had any such feelings till she met him...
Reading or dreaming about a feeling is very different from actually experiencing it...
and when she did start having those feelings she is just unsure what path to take.. it's no longer teenage... it's grown up world and any actions will have consequences and she is mature enough to understand that and that's why she is willing to let go of her feelings..
I would consider her far more mature than many girls her age as she was willing to bury her feelings as she understood they were not practical in her life..
Her talk with Payal is just her looking for a way to assure herself that she is doing the right thing...not that she doesn't understand what the two words mean..
OOh yeah one more thing don't think that she doesn't know about s*x, she does, she is doctor, she probably had a teacher who taught the mechanics of it... but be sure to remember she has never been touched by a man..
hope that clears her character a little..
Part 25
Nani walked to the breakfast table with a bright smile on her face. All the family members were surprised to see her so cheerful after what had happened last night but didn't voice their thoughts as they didn't want her to be unhappy again.

Nani greeted every one and even greeted her older grandson who seemed to be in one of his black moods this morning. He had just nodded at her greeting and said a brisk good morning to her and had gone back to his grumpy mood. But nothing could spoil Nani's mood today.

She waited for HP and his help to finish serving and when the help had retired to the kitchen and her family had started eating. She took a deep breath and prayed to Devi Maiyya for blessings and said "I have something to say to all of you. Last night after the discussion with Chotey I have thought it through and decided that just because Chotey is not interested in marriage it doesn't mean we have to ignore Aakash."

All her family looked at her except her older grandson who behaved like nothing was new and had continued eating his breakfast. She noticed her son Manohar nod after giving it some thought. She saw that Manorama was weeping tears of joy and was hugging Aakash who was seated beside her. She saw Aakash who was trying to move away from his mother's clutches. She saw Anjali looking so happy and grinning like a kid with a big candy in her hand. She saw the Sharma's watching the Raizada's with a smile on their lips.

She continued "I think I have a good girl in mind for him.." this got everybody's attention back on her again except of course her Chotey's who was behaving as if this was all old news to him and kept eating his breakfast. She ignored him and said to the rest of her family

"Her personality and Aakash's personality will be a wonderful match," she paused looked at the eager faces of her family and proudly declared her choice for Aakash

"I am talking about Khushi bitiya.."

"WHAT!!" came three horrified at once which almost gave her a heart attack and almost sent her packing out of this world.

Devyani had expected one voice but… three voices… she had not even dreamed about this. She saw Manorama standing and looking for a way to voice her thought to her mother-in-law, this she expected, she knew Manorama wanted a rich daughter-in-law, she also knew how to handle this issue.

Then she looked at Aakash who was also standing, she frowned what was with Aakash he didn't like Khushi? Or maybe it was just the suddenness of her announcement but she knew whatever it was she would be able to convince Aakash quite easily.

Then she looked at her Chotey, who stood there fuming at her, "What had she done, now?" She had not said anything related to him at all. She saw him open his mouth and try to say something to her but he stopped midway and had stormed out of the dining area toppling his chair on his way out towards the stairs to his room. They also heard him bang his room door shut and also heard something crash in his room.

She looked around the table to see Aakash and Manorama leaving as well, she also noticed Anjali following Aakash to his room and she frowned she never seemed to do anything right now-a-days.

She had seen Payal and Khushi again last night and had imagined her house if the two sisters were her to stay for good in her house. She didn't wish for much she just wanted her grandsons to settle down with their life partners. She had a secret desire to hold her great-grand-child in her arms before she bids good bye to this world.

She adored the two girls. She saw how Payal was strong and mature, she also saw how innocent and lovable Khushi was. She wanted both. She had decided that they would be perfect matches for her grandson's. Payal would be able to handle Arnav and his infamous temper with her maturity and patience. It could not be Khushi for Arnav, like she had wished when she had first met Khushi, he would destroy her beautiful world with his cynicism.

But she was not ready to let Khushi go, Khushi's smiles always brightened her day. Her Aakash would be the gentle lover that Khushi deserved. Khushi would be so good for Aakash's introvert nature. Khushi's open loving nature and Aakash's affectionate nature would blend so well. Both couples would be perfect for each other she had thought and expressed her desire to her older grandson.

But her older grandson had chucked her plans in the trash bin after irrecoverably damaging them. She had felt defeated but thinking about it again, she had realized she still had Aakash to take care of. Just because Arnav did not want to get married doesn't mean that Aakash has to stay away from marriage. Yes, she had decided what her course of action would be and had gone to bed much more at peace with the world.

So she had come to the breakfast table to express her thoughts and this was the result. She definitely understood Manorama's reaction, she could also guess Aakash's reluctance but what left her clueless was her Chotey's reaction.

He is so complex, she just decided to ignore his reaction and headed towards Aakash's room to see what was bothering her not-so-crazy grandson.

Hope you enjoyed it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
ha ha...this nani is surely mad.can never do anything right.poor chote
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
it was bang on loved nani's bomb
I really am so happy what nani did
n cherry on top ASR reaction muah muah for wonderful job😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
thank you for the pm's😊
read 22-25 together... it was very well written. thanks for clarifying khushi's thoughts on arnav.😊
Hope nani figure out arnav's feelings towards khushi
Edited by molten-aqua - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
the updates were just beautiful giving insights into the feelings of arshi...lovely
very sensitively portrayed 👏
pls update soon 😃

thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
nani drop super bomb!! great update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
darling nani u have become famous for ur blunders 😆

letme tell u...it is always arshi & payash and there can be no cross connection 😉😆

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon 😃

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