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nice story so farrrr ryte longg thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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part 4

angad has planned everything out and is on his way to the sharma masion he gets to the basement from a secret entrence that is at angad house to the sharma house he sneaks up the stairs he tip toes upstairs and goes to kripas room he closes the door and looks around for a secret door for the money he looks everywhere it takes him about an hour to find it then he opens the lock after 30 min then a girl comes out of the shower and she is about to scream angad sees her and covers her mouth and ties her to a chair then he takes out a gun and points it towards her

a- you will come with me miss. sharma and ill be taking your money as well!! (laughs evilly)

kripa is so scared that she faints angad carries her on his shoulder and calls someone on his cell

a- hey

s- yea...

a- i got the money and miss. sharma..

s- ok... im coming

you see a guy walking up the stair in a butlurs outfit then he opens the door and you see his face and it is prithvi he looks at kripa and the money and laughs evilly with angad

a- ok prithvi... you take the money and ill take miss. sharma from here and meet me at my house..

p- ok yaar...

angad carries kripa to the basement and goes through the secret passage way and ends up in his study room then he hears a ring he places kripa on the sofa and opens the door prithvi comes in with the money in a bag and hands it to angad

a- go tie up miss. sharma in my room.... ill put this money in the safe...

p- ok..

angad takes the money to the safe and puts it in there while prithvi takes kripa to angads room and ties her on the bed then he goes down to angad

a(thinks)- another brilliant plan succesfull!!

after an hour kripa wakes up and sees she is tied to a bed and she screams for help angad come running up and kripa is scared to see him

hope you like it

thanks everyone... when ruhee comes back we will both continue... 😉

i just read your fanfic,it great,cant wait til you continue

diff story but nice continue soon n make teh parts longer

just started reading, it's great cont. soon

in.....ter...sting 😈 who am i kidding that was awsome and CONTINUE SOON 😡 😡 PLEAZE thank u 😳 😳

in.....ter...sting 😈 who am i kidding that was awsome and CONTINUE SOON 😡 😡 PLEAZE thank u 😳 😳