ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed] - Page 72

A very peaceful ending.
Enjoyed each and every update of this story.
Thankyou very much for giving us such a beautiful story. :-)

RB,

Thank you so much for this story, I have to apologize for saying this was not on the same level as your other story "We the People". Each story has its own strength and this was no different. You asked us, what were are most and least favourite moments and most replied. I was honestly surprised with the question; the reason being this story is beyond good or bad/right or wrong. It is something that most of us could learn from. How to be a better human; how not to be selfish; how to be selfish and above all; how to be human and accept it. In this story we see the human weakness and strength in its naked glory and we would be better if we were to learn from it. It could be from Lavanya, Payal, Nani, Suman or even Anjali. Learn we must.

I always fall into a trap of the supporting the protagonist and hating the antagonist, this story blurred the lines to such an extent, and it forced me to look at a person in every angle. Pointing out to me, not everything it black or white, I will thank you again for that. Again I ask for the big desktop you use, in the hope I too do a better job at trying.

"If faith in ourselves had been more extensively taught and practiced, I am sure a very large portion of the evils and miseries that we have would have vanished." – Swami Vivekananda.

-K

There is something about this calm after the storm which makes them feels so light and peaceful. The entire setup of the house, rain and them was very nicely done. the best thing about your characters is that I haven't seen you explicitly mentioning their physical beauty, but they always seem so attractive!

wow!! loved this update...Arnav and Khushi are at ease in each others comapany...a very beautiful last chapter for this ff. My heart felt light after reading this chapter...Thank u so much for ur precious time u spent on this ff and also for pms. thanks dear. Would love to follow ur other future works too...keep going...

a beautiful chapter dear...
both ov them really deserve this happiness...
lovd it...
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thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

As much as I was in tears yesterday I was smiling and happy today ... Excellent ending and excellent fiction


Looking forward for the new FF

lovely ending...

i loved this update...lavanya and khushi's heart to heart talk was very nicely described!!! lavanya has truly evolved as a person...

You gave it a very fitting ending !!! They are finally home and here's to a new beginning for them ... Thanks for such a wonderful story . Loved each and every chapter . And thanks for the PM :) One of the best stories I have read !!!!

awww!!! It was so beautiful an ending!!!! I'll miss this one!