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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow, so beautiful! I can't even express in more words than that.

So how old are Arnav and Khushi at the present time? Your update said they had been together for less than a decade at that time and then there was a 7 year separation.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow that was an amazing and beautiful update, written exceptionally well. Wow you wrote there intimate love making so beautifully it was just mind blowing. It was such a heart warming and wonderful moment for Arnav when he realised that khushi even thought of Arnav when she is sleeping. i loved Arnav's response to why he choose khushi over Lavanya because he fell in love with her "facade of simplicity" that was a beautiful answer. However I just love khushi's response that was simply mind blowing and the following paragraph was amazing;

"She placed her cheek on his heart and smiled inwardly when it jumped few pulses. "I was a grey moth settled in a shadowed corner and absolved in a world of my own. And then one day a new student walked into my class and I looked up. In his eyes, there were bright lights." She stopped and exhaled slowly. "Like a moth to the flame." She whispered to his skin and delivered her words directly to his heart. And he was hit by wave of melancholy and love all over again."

Congrats on the new thread, please continue soon as I'm eager to read the next part and also thanks for the PM xx

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

What a beautiful and emotional chapter...Loved it...

Arnav and Khushi share such a beautiful and loving relationship...You have expressed what they feel themselves and for each other in such a simple yet beautiful manner...

Khushi dreaming about Arnav...Arnav feeling touched hearing her murmur his name in her sleep...both of them reminiscing why they were drawn to each other...

Like a " moth to the flame"...they are made for each other...Soulmates...

Reading it brought tears to my eyes...Wonderful and eagerly waiting for more...

Thanks for the PM...

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Aww wish things are like this between them!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

beautiful yet again... so well written... your writing is intoxicated... you are keeping us emotionally connected n glued to these characters...

the love they share is just divine and it wont be fair to make such souls suffer to this extent... i cant help but cry over the pain that these two people should have gone through when they were separated...

please dont separate them again...

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Their feelings beautifully portrayed, honestly I don't think if Arshi enacted this it would have been this great, how do u do this time and again man??? Ur truly gifted, thanks for the pm. Btw I read it twice! Just cannot get enough of it!