ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 2 - [Completed] - Page 6

First congrats on a new thread!!! Hope this story gets many more!!!

Hmm interesting chapter... So they both knew from the beginning about lavanya's feelings?

A lovely interlude, giving us great insight into how Arnav and Khushi were when they were together. It's evident just how in tune they were then and are now. This interlude shows the sheer depth of their relationship even then. Their responses to why they 'chose' each other, perhaps sometimes there is no choice, it just is.

CHAPTER 21 ' Old friend and dark truth

"I didn't have enough evidence back then to tell others that there was a possibility that I was in love with my own brother."

OMG, I cringed!! That line sent shivers down my spine.

Oh'''.I would never want to be in Khushi's place and situation'''I totally get it why she ran away from everybody and everything that was Arnav.😲

CHAPTER 22 ' Cosmic Limbo

It was the most poignant chapter of all and the best confession of love I have read in the world of Arnav Khushi FF (without using the three words that mean everything to any person in love "I love you", who live and die to just listen to those three words). No melodrama, no overburdening emotions, just normal words. Their reasons were for falling in love was complicated yet simple. What you wrote was PUREST loving make and the best expression of love!!

I read this chapter and read CHAPTER 20 ' Blazing hearts and calming arms. Because chapter 22 gives insight Arnav Khushi's relationship. The ease, the soul and heart connection they have, the camaraderie, unsaid understanding and love and faith in each other. It explains why Arnav Khushi are at ease with each other even after the turmoil they have been through.

This devout relationship is the reason -

- They are able to stand in front of each other today

- They don't hate each other today

- They understand why they are what they are today

- They still can talk about their past with ease (except for why Khushi fled on the wedding night)

They still will support each other

When I was reading chapter 20 I did have questions about Arnav not being angry or bitter and why they are still able to face each other so comfortably without showing the storm in their hearts and hiding the complex emotions they going thru, and this Chapter answers all those questions.

"Khushi," "Stop thinking," "Don't think about what is happening, don't analyse how or why is your body is reacting. Just feel okay?"

The above line has such deep meaning ' It explains how well Arnav knows Khushi, He loves her for her complexities and insecurities. It also gives the reason why Khushi left her own wedding ' She was trapped in her trait of "Analyzing things and over thinking". She was present some story and went down the rabbit hole. Things would have been different if Khushi has implemented these lines from Arnav on her the day of her wedding - Probably!!

This chapter had Arnav's "I LOVE YOU DAMN IT" and Khushi's "HUM BHI AAP SE I LOVE YOU DAMN IT" effect on me.

You know your writing in this FF reminds me of Christopher Nolan's "MEMENTO"' go figure 😉

Amazing and once again a brilliant chapter . It was so poignant that it just broke my heart . The hardships Khushi and Arnav went through is just something . They are so made for each other . In spite of the gap years they still love each other fiercely and passionately . This is what true love is . Facing the hurdles that life throws at us together . Hope now at least she confides in Arnav what actually went on 7 years ago and together they tackle it .

beautifully written 😊

All I can say is tat I m addicted to this ff like moth to the flame!!!

Your writing is so beautiful that it touches most tender part of my heart. I read and reread and reread just to understand the way you use words to phrase sentences, which take on the powerful meaning that is soul stirring. Your writing style adds incredible amount of depth to the characters you are presenting. They are the philosophers who understand the meaning of life because they are willing to look inside themselves.

A melancholic love it has been, may be right from the beginning.