SS: Zindagi of 'ARSHI' Season 2 PART 15- Pg: 80 THE END

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hariniroshini

@hariniroshini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

cursing my luck for missing the first comment. had powercut when i clicked POST REPLY...:(

however, first time ever on first page comment...😊😊😊 first to like...:)

that too on my dear buddy's FF.. my fav FF...

overwhelming!!!

while reading i was bewildered for a sec and got confused of children ages...

even thought of checking out character sketch...

but i read the last note...:)

i loved the update...

the flashback moments of khushi with mohit are really romantic comparatively...

well, its happy that AA (arnav-lav daughters) instantly accepted khushi as maa...

waiting for next update..:)

thx for the PM and the promise u kept...:P

Edited by hariniroshini - 12 years ago

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

loved it

pain isa part of life

but its vain to live life with only pain

its better to move on n find a bit of peace rather than hurt onself over n over again

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Emotional part...

Starting with emotions...

Both arshi lost thr love life...

Hmmm hope arshi will find thr love in them...

Kids r so cute...

Waiting for nxt part

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Amazing start. Balanced update future present and for Arnav and Khushi.

Kids age that's suit now. Pari too small . What happened to Mohit?
Aki and Apu both seems like accepted their step mom... Pari too small so it won't be a big problem even for Aku its may not be effect . But for elders its really big issue.
Lavanya really loves Arnav. Mohit very witty man. Now Arnav and Khushi their partners complete opposite.
When she cried he didn't let her make her smile.
On otherwise she didn't cry. So he was surprised by that nature but used tout too .
Thanks for scrap.

Edited by riafna - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Arnav and khushi have 3 little musketeers in their life, who are constantly going to throw them together.

I like the pace of the story so far. Clearly it is compromise wedding and arnav and khushi have to take baby steps in establishing their relationship.

Liked the fact that the AAs have accepted khushi into their life thats one problem less to handle for khushi.

Wonder how they will progress.

Liza

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

the kids are sooo cute and sweet...
they immediately accepted khushi as their ma...
yeah life has pain happiness everything...it depends on us if we want to remember the past and get pain or live for ourselves and others with happiness...i hope arshi find peace with eacother
its good that you changed the age of the kids,there isnt much age gap between the kids it will be more easy for them to bond with each other...
looking forward for the next updates
wonderful update
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

superb updt

what happen to mohit is he dead or still alive
kids r so sweet they accepted khushi
its good that u change the age of kids

updt soon

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Asvati

@Asvati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

😭
i felt bad for them
vot happnd to La and Mohit?
how did they die???

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

well, lovely written..its pretty good yaar..go ahead...I loved how straightforward Arnav was! You made me laugh when Mohit uttered "What?" ha ha..and the flashback emotional scenes of bidaii was touchy! too good!

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Loved the update. So anjali and nani doesnt stay with Arnav? Arshi's flashbacks during the car ride was sad.. Hope they both find love with each other. Kids were cute. Both A and A accepted khushi has mother instantly that was a relief. Hope the 3 kids dont fight within them and accept each other has siblings. Eagerly waiting to know how the story unfolds itself. Thanks for the PM. Cont soon.