SS: Zindagi of 'ARSHI' Season 2 PART 15- Pg: 80 THE END

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

awe what apiece of work buddy so a part of me is highly diasspointed but yup the third last and second last part..the way you show aparna and kushi relationship marvellous buddy..this kind of writting i loved it shws naturality and if i think in that prespect then yes your end is justified..
loved your story..the aturity and the way you handle it..
specially the think that they dont fall in love with in days but in years like amture persona nd the aprna handle her disapointment in abhi ..rakhi scene thumbs up:)
thank you for this beautiful story :)
soory for late comment but i had beend away from here for two months:(

contiue ZOA1 too please..:)

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Awesome ending! The story was beautiful!

You are a wonderful writer!

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@.LadyHitler.

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

First of all Hearty congratulations.. And all the best for your exams..
That was a perfect ending..
Arnav realized his love for khushi.. The way he expressed his love was lovely.. He wanted to be like a teenager who wants to declare love for his khushi.. Aww that's so sweet
And then khushi's response,, Khajar ka halwa 🤣
Loved that scene where appu stopped khushi from leaving.. That's like a complete family..
Thank you for such a beautiful update..
But feeling sad that this ended.. I fell in love with this FF very lately and it ended so soon 😔
BTW sorry for late comment.. Couldn't just leave it saying nice ending.. Had to take time..

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kritash

@kritash

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

awesome ss.
loved it.
superb.
fantastic and fabulous.
loved it.
liked the way you narrated the story.
liked the way arnav and kushi's bonded.
loved the way apu and kushi bonded.
fantabulous.

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Very touching and beautiful story of second chances. You portray emotions beautifully and it was absolutely a treat to read this story. :) Loved it. :)

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Sadia

@sadia98

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Good ,i love the concept,i'm quite late 😊

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#467

intersting concept...handled very beautifully

Loved the way their relation progressed slowly, steadily... the realistic touch in the story was a refreshing change, though would not have minded more Arshi romance😛😛

did I miss Khusi's confession??