Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Love this story...intense, emotional...

Re-read till chap 6 with interpretations till 4, beautiful ...😊

Waiting for chap 7 Smita...

Waiting for interpretations for 5&6 Rashmi...

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Tanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

so finally he gave it a thought hope he realises soon
dis was a wonderful update luvd it

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

This update was so intense. You have taken the intensity of feelings to another level and now both are actually admitting that all is not normal.

Khushi smelling his coat and hugging it and crying...and Arnav realizing she is slipping away...trying to figure out what is different and eventually realizing that Payal's are missing...I felt goosebumps...honestly...too good.

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

nice comments rashmi...

fantastic work...

keep it up...

thnks for the PM...

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shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

really loving the way it's moving... So Arnav now finally realize her payal was missing. Will he be able to know that Khusi get the money with that .. I am waiting for his next actions.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

eagerly waiting for today's update

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Rash and Smi!! I am here early today!! 😃

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

it was so good.the emotions were so perfect.n its so sad to see khushi struggling.🥺 n arnav needs a full bucket of water splashed onto him to enlighten the mighty ASR. 🤪

waiting 4 the next installment soon. 😉