Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15) - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally he has realised her missing payal !! Hope he gets her amma's last memory back 4 her :) Update soon xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update! This getting so interesting! Arnav needs to stop beating around the bush and tell her how he feels. Oh no Khushi is moving back to Lucknow?! I hope Arnav stops her. So looks like Arnav will find out Khushi sold her payal to pay him the rent. I hope he gets it back for her! Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
the calmness and dignity with which khushi conducts herself is touching... can empathise with her and the battle she constantly wages between her sense of self-respect and her budding desire for arnav: Khushi shivered. His fragrance... the warmth of his body... enveloping her... his angry eyes softening, focusing on her trembling lips, promising her till then unknown delights...
arnav loves and cares for khushi but sure has a strange way of showing it... the gesture of putting the coat around her was moving! "Are you really planning to travel across Delhi wearing a wet suit that clings to your body?" his concern about what could happen to her if she went out in her almost see-through clothes is touching, though he really needs a lesson in showing his softer side! beautiful imagery: The fire in his eyes was different from the fire in his voice. her words about vacating his house must have come as a rude shock... he would never have imagined her to turn the tables on him thus... nice to see all his plans crumbling to dust around his feet! She had slipped through his fingers ... and was going farther and farther away from him. She had left RM and him... the job... And now she was vacating the house too? poignant words reflecting arnav's helplessness and despair! however, can't sympathise with him much as he brought it all on himself! for a shrewd guy, how does he believe that blackmailing someone or forcing them to do things will make them melt towards him? his grey cells have truly gone abegging!
Arnav turned his anguished eyes to the image of the culprit in the mirror. loved this turn of phrase, clearly showing arnav accepting he's in the wrong... the gradual manner in which he realises that khushi's payals were missing has been beautifully etched... so, who's he calling at this time of night, khushi or the ever-efficient aman?
you really have a knack for tugging at our heartstrings as is borne out by the whole scene of khushi's emotional turmoil and confusion, especially she weeping into arnav's coat bunched in her hands... that coat symbolises the reason for her pain while, ironically, also being her source of comfort!
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Posted: 12 years ago
While trying to get her back into his life, he is hurting her, and driving her away. Hope he will realize this. Liked Khushi's resolve to not to return to RM, because of Arnav's threat
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope arnav realises that only love can bring khushi back to him not his threats...it was a wonderful update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abhi aaga kya hoga?

Arnav kya aisa plan bana payega ki jisse Khushi Delhi mai hi rahe?

Kab dono ko mehsoos hoga ki 2no ek doosre se pyaar karte hai?

so many questions n we will get answers soon may be in next updates.

Awesome update dear.
Edited by hetaldave - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent! you are way too brilliant!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Smitaji... 😊

I just finishd reading all parts of this FF... I must tell you I have fallen in love with you even more... 😃

Of all the FF of yours...tht I hv read till now... Arnav Singh Raizada was never so cruel
I loved our ever so strong Khushi tooo...
She had to give away her mother's anklets for the rent...😔
I hope after hurting Khushi till the worst...now Arnav has his. Self realisation nd accept too tht he is in llove with our Khushi darling...
Can't wait to read the nxt update...

Rashmi Thanks for the PMs. Love you...

😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
God! My heart is beating madly!!! Such raw emotions in just one update...that was such a soul-gripping part...loved their turmoil and realization. Arnav finally figured out the payal fiasco...Oh, please update soon...I can't wait to read wha happens next!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant! As soon as she came to the office I thought he would notice that there was no noise from her payals and then was disappointed that he had overlooked that...so was surprised to read that he finally realises...beautifully written!

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