Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Smitajii... for records... it's already Wednesday in Australia...😉

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Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

OMG. I didn;t even know she started her second one and she is done with 5 UPDATES? :O

Godd stupid me. >.<

Good work Smitar!

Thanks for postign Rashmi :D

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smitar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Smitajii... for records... it's already Wednesday in Australia...😉

Thankfully, I am in India!!!! 😆

I am going to write Part 6. Will post late tonight or early tomorrow morning.😃

Smita

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farha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

wow nice,loved it,arnavs face will be full of surprise would worth watching.

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: smitar

Thankfully, I am in India!!!! 😆

I am going to write Part 6. Will post late tonight or early tomorrow morning.😃

Smita

hehehhehe i was just reminding you that Wednesday arrived in the world...😆 take your time... no pressure...😊

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ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome update! Arnav can be such a jerk sometimes. Why can't he just be honest with her instead of hurting her every time! I can't believe he did that. Hopefully Khushi will be able to see through this and understand why he is doing it. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Habfa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Nice update. Waiting for part 6 😊

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craziefan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

arnav is in for a shock...when khushi will hand him the money..

wonder what he will do next ...

have to wait for the next update...sigh..

you are amazing writer...love your work.

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Brilliant part!!
I hope Khushi will get her payal back:-)
Great job!

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sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Part 5.. Waking of the tigress..

Arnav's actions have awakened all the dormant strength of Khushi.. She is willing to do anything to save her family and not loose to a coward like Arnav..

Brought on the helplessness of both Khushi and Arnav to the front.. but one is a fighter and the other is a puppeteer(who is going to face his first loss)...

Brilliant once again Smita.. Great going and please update soon...