Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Minahil Nauman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Adorable O.S 👏

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Lanu16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Rulama you really know how to write...you have become one of my Fav authors...and i adore your work...simply brilliant...Thank you soo much for fast updates...i love it

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GoldenEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

excellent update!

both are miserable and heartbroken 😭

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Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

omg what ideas do you have. amazing, u are very talented.
so he goes out to see her and had been doing that for all these nights. i almost gasped while reading that!!!

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Lanu16
Rulama you really know how to write...you have become one of my Fav authors...and i adore your work...simply brilliant...Thank you soo much for fast updates...i love it

Smita with the ID smitar is the one who writes.

I am just a messenger.

I post as she has technical difficulties!

Rashmi (rulama)

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Arshipriya16

@Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Awesome,best,fantastic,marvellous,mindblowing,out of the world all words r little infront of ur this update.U have to be a writer Smita if u do it u'll get a lot of suc & i m saying this from my heart.I really like this part of urs,really touch it to the heart.Thanks for pm Rashmi.
Finally i m getting 1 marathi word & i.e. ~~~ZAKAAAS~~~

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

yes yes arnav finally saw da light!

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Aysha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

i love how khushi took a stand for herself in part 3

and arnav goes there and watches her every night and now has made a resolve that he will bring her back..cant wait to see what he does

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

man i almost missed on this but am here now
so it seems he lost khushi
well it was hi own cowardice that she aint with him
but he couldn't brinh himself to see what they have between them
oh well guess that shall change and soon
or will it one hopes it does
they are just suffereing so much without each other
wait where is shyam in all this
or he not here in this one