Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Tammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Yay! Another story of yours. Makes me happy!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Loved d update
Arnav's feelings were beautifully written
Thanx for pm
update soon

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Visitor123

@Visitor123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

YAY!! He is going to bring her back. 😃

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jojo21

@jojo21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Wow Arnav can't help but feel for her, now in only he can garner the strength and tell and show her, perhaps be nice to her, she might admit her feelings as well.

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sujata5

@sujata5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Part 4 brought a lump in my throat...

The happy Khushi has so many demons to fight when alone.. and doing a marvelous job of hiding the pain when with others.. It is when she is alone that it all comes crashing down.. So well written and portrayed

👏👏👏

Rashmi I am still waiting for the analysis for Finding Khushi...

Now waiting for Monday to pass quickly as there is no update from Smita ... But still have hope from you Rashmi...

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monsi08

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

all i can say is.. W.O.W !!!!!!

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shafqee80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

yar beautifully expressed emotions ...loveeellyyy

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Arthi

@ar_art

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Mentos dimag ki batti jalade...this was for the last part where he understands his needs...
i love the Part 3... the advertisements were just awesome especially the vicks one and the mosquito repellent...
also the fevicol one... that was really hilarious...
i read al the parts today and now waiting for more...
lovely dear...