Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

omg the horlicks add was so appropriate, mein badal rahe hun!!!
i cant wait to see this track in a different light.
its good she tld him abt the blackmailing and tht she even said no to nani.
however, why did he came there?

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adventure_roks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

her feelings were visible along with her pain...
i hope he doesnt make some stupid deal to mak her return...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Good that he made the decision to get her back.

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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

part3:

fab writing smita!

loved the punctuations in the convo in the form of ads...

what had arnav come to ask??? or say??? for once he was silent and he listened to her...

khushi is so strong! but i cant watch her heart get broken over and over again :(((

part 4:

so thats what arnav wanted to tell her??? that lavs is out! n he couldnt bring himself to do that...

he watched khushi every night :))) why wud someone love to trouble oneself and the one they loved just because they lacked a lil bit of courage??? the entire khushi buaji payal scene was fab... just the kind of khushi that she is accused of spreading around her :D

one drop of that happiness for arnav and his life is set! so what is he going to do to bring her back? cant wait to see what he does next :)))

Edited by cherry227 - 12 years ago

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Damn Khushi's trying to be happy for her family, i guess it's hard

I'm glad that Arnav realizes that he was a coward..

& now his family is suspicious of him hmm

iLike his new plan 👏👏

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

awesome update
liked it very much
continue soon

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__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Omg...he goes to see her everynight...and khushi...my heart brakes for her!

Amazing update!

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mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

awesome update!!! oh god i feel so hurt for kushi!!

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Khushi's outer cold indifference towards Arnav but inner vulnerability and weakness in her aloofness is depicted beautifully ! Love that u make Khushi strong!! Hope she gives Arnav a bitter dose of his own medicine for humiliating her so badly and acting as the biggest coward!! Pls make Khushi say the word COWARD on Arnav's face !!

Edited by Doc_Manaal - 12 years ago

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

very moving update... glad that arnav didn't prolong his relationship of convenience with lavanya but ended it even if it meant that she was hurt in the bargain... hopefully it wasn't as shocking and as painful a revelation as happened in the show [the dignified manner in which lavanya conducted herself then raised my respect for her]... arnav has acted as a complete jerk toward both the women in his life but at least had the sense to end things with lavanya before it was too late or everyone ended up miserable... must say the family's anger is justified!

at the same time, seeing arnav's emotional turmoil is emotionally draining on them, too... "This boy! When will he find peace? Driving around most of the night and working all day!" hopefully, mami's investigation will come in handy! lovely to see arnav's thoughts full of khushi and the wrong he did her... Eyes which condemned him for not having the guts to face what was brewing between them …. for taking refuge under Lavanya's pallu….. no truer words have been spoken!

both arnav and khushi seem to be keeping themselves busy day and night in the hope of outrunning their memories, and to the detriment of their health... khushi's happy demenour slipping the moment buaji and payal move away was heart-breaking! so, having watched her nightly pain and tears, and experienced similar heartache, arnav is determined to get her back... how he goes about it will be the interesting part... given that khushi is as stuborn as he, and after his soul-destroying words, will she go back to him willingly unless he admits his feelings for her? life has just become more fascinating!

on a lighter note, given the congested bylanes of laxmi nagar, how is it that no one has noticed or informed the police of a WHITE SUV parked outside khushi's house on a NIGHTLY basis... has arnav covered it with harry potter's cloak of invisibility? 😆... that's security in Delhi, for you 😕!