Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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sivatharshini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Superb update !!! continue soon

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SAM32

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Posted: 12 years ago

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wao!!!! great update.. waiting for next

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Sunara

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hay this is nice! waiting to read more!

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Lovely update... The radio ads reminds me of the 80s movies.

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

I love these takes on canon and how you deviate from them. So Khushi has left...will Arnav pursue her?

Heck yeah! I hope he can realise how he feels and convince Khushi of his feelings...

Poor Lavanya..again. She will be hurt.

The scene with the radio ads and the heart wrenching shock Khushi must have felt was brilliantly done!

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

waiting for next update.the story is addictive

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blek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

really touching
thanx 4 the pm😊

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choochootrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Love my kushi...heartbroken but still.got spunk...

Love you, e writer more for continuing giving us arhi stories!!!!...so happy u started a new one...

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Hey!

I hope you both are well ... 😊

Well-written.

I don't blame Khushi for not going to the Raizada mansion. I mean like she said ... her job is over and done with isn't it ... Having said that, Khushi was happy to carry out instructions that were given to her, bless her. A very hard working individual. She was treated like crap by Arnav and here he is now thinking about her, getting angry at her ... coaxing her into picking up her phone in order to talk to members of his family ... jeeez! Does he expect her to openly smile at him and listen to everything and obey him ... pfttt! Hell no! 😡😡