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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

sounds serious...

kriya ki life inni difficult kyun banate ho tum log??? 😔

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AMAZING

n so deeep

looking forward to all ur interesting works!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome intro..
lovedit waiting for d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue


A guy, perfectly dressed up was riding his bike like anything. Breaking signals and what not. Soon he stopped infront of a house. "Arey baba aa rahi hun." someone replied to the horn of his bike. "Jaldi aao baatcutter warna late ho jaayenge." He spoke out. "Haan bas 2 mins." she said as she engaged herself in looking 'perfect' for someone really very special.


"Heyii..." she spoke out and as flopped on the bike just behind him. "Hey." he replied but didn't started off his bike. "Arey, mere pyaare chabilaal, ye apni bike ko chalaane ka iraada hai ya nahi?" kriya asked. "I didn't got it still!" he spoke out. "Aww, my baby needs something?" she replied followed with a chuckle. "Baatcutter..." Rey spoke out with a puppy face of his. "Accha accha theek hai!" kriya said as she pecked his cheek. "Now shall we leave?" asked kriya. "This is not fair!" rey pouted.

"Oh, everything is fair in love and war honey." spoke out kriya as they left for their college.

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Kriya and Reyaansh - The hot and happening couple of St. Louis. Basically, they started off with friendship - which can never be broken easily. Slowly they realized that it was just not friendship. It was more than that. And result? They end being a couple. Girls just go la-la over Rey, while boys; Ah just a look of her can make them go flat.
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On their ride back, rey spoke out "I'm gonna get it!". "Ya, we will see to it." she replied. "This isn't fair with me baatcutter" rey spoke out. "Hmm, so kya chahiye mere pyaale se boyfriend ko?" she spoke out as she kept her chin on his shoulder. "You are distracting me!" he said. "How?" kriya asked. "Baatcutter, a little distance please? Else, we would surely hit someone." he replied. "Now this isn't fair with me!" said kriya with a pout.

"Baatcutter, we would have a lot of time today. Jo chahiye de dunga." he spoke out as he remember they would have only one or two classes today. "Pakka?" "Pakka but only if I get what I need!" replied rey. "Wo toh tum kaise bhi karke roz le lete ho!" replied kriya.

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As they reached the college, all eyes were just fixed upon them. Holding hands, they left for canteen. "Hmm so what you need? Chocolate or pineapple?" asked rey. "REY! You knew it. Don't you?" she spoke out. "Obviously I knew hun!" rey spoke as he left to havve something for him and her.


In the mean time a boy came and sat opposite to her. "Heyii beautiful!" he spoke out. Having a look at him, one could clearly say that he was an idiot to even advance at her with those looks of him. Back at a side, a few boys just burst out laughing as they saw 'him' with kriya. They weren't laughing at kriya, indeed the were laughing at him thinking what would happen with him if 'Rey' comes back soon.

"Here!" spoke out rey as he handed kriya's pastry to her. A look at left and he asked, "Who's he?". "Ignore!" spoke out kriya as she engaged herself having her pastry. "You didn't have any?" asked kriya. "No, I don't need it." he said with his eyes glued at the guy who was giving strange looks to kriya. "Excuse me, can you leave please?" spoke out rey. "Huh?" spoke out guy in a trance. Ah, it didn't took much time for Rey to understand those looks and all. "I said leave!" he spoke out angrily as kriya coughed listening his angry tone.

"Uh, rey leave it na." she tried calming him down as the guy left - totally scared of rey! "Matlab had hoti hai!" he spoke out. 'REY! you know na I don't give it a damn. Then even?" she asked. "I don't like anyone seeing you that way!" he spoke out. "Arey! Accha chod. Ye kha." she made him eat the pastry by her hands.

"Hmmm" he said as he took a bite. "Let's go!" spoke out kriya as they finished it up feeding each other. "Where?" asked rey as she smacked his head. "Class!" she reminded him. "Do we really have to?" asked rey. "Rey, it's he last year. And waise bhi I don't want to miss it. So you are coming and that's it!" she replied back as she took him to the class forcefully!

After the class.

Kriya was just walking in the corridor looking for rey. He was nowhere and it was irritating him. She wanted to spend time with him and he? He is lost and don't know where!

As she walked past fire exit, someone pulled her inside. She didn't shouted knowing it well who it could be. "Rey! Where the hell have you been. I was looking for you like anything and..." she was speaking as he kept his finger on her lips. "Shh... you are such a baatcutter!" he spoke out as he saw a pout playing on her lips. "But I love this baatcutter." he spoke out as he brushed his lips on her left cheek. A chill ran down her spine and she closed her eyes out of pure bliss.

"Rey, this isn't happening. I was looking for you like anything and I didn't found you anywhere until you pulled me over here!" she pouted as he smiled ear to ear. "Hmm so you were missing me. Huh?" asked rey in a husky tone. "Nahi! Why would I miss you?" spoke out kriya as she crossed her arms. "Well, I don't care if you were or not. All I knew is I was waiting to spend some quality time with you!" he spoke out as he trapped her in between his arms.

"Accha?" asked kriya as she wrapped her arms around his neck. "Haan! So now can I have it?" asked rey. "Even if I will say no, will you not have it?" she counter questioned him. "Ya you are right!" spoke out rey as he took her lips in a sweet yet passionate kiss.




Prologue hai n Prologue chotu hota hai as compared to the chaps 🤔
So Jhelo ise!

Next Update : Page 9
PMs after updating AsYa n Swaron version too 😳

- Aroma And Konpal
Edited by -ChocoPie- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Reswaaa ... 🤣

Unress ... 😉

This has a very different title too ... 😃

Really Liked the idea ... 👏

Rey and Kriya hot and happening couple ... Woah ! 😎

Presentation was too Good ! 😛

Liked the Bike scene too much ... ❤️

How can they be sooo cute as same time sensuous ...

Really takes a lot of guts to act like that ... 😆

Rey as possessive Boyfriend .. Nice ! 👍🏼

Bechara Guy ... Kriya pe Line maarne chala tha ... 😆

Dumbo ! Itna bi nai pata ki Rey usse kachcha chaba jayega ...

And Like Kriya ... She was surviving the situation and calming Rey ... 😛

Ab Rey jaisa B.F and Kriya jaisi G.F ho toh poora clg toh Line maarenge naa ... 😉

Fir Kriya kisi girl ka muh tode ya Rey koi boy ki taang ... 🤣

And Last, Fire Exit scene .. Sensuous ! ☺️

Good treat to us !

Overall .. it was too good ... 👏

Had all the flavors .. Sweet .. Sour .. Bitter 😆

P.S- I Like these types of ur Works ... 😉

Avi ke liye itna kaafi hai ... 😊

Hope u're Happy and Satisfies now ... 😆

~ Ur's only and only one piece Dost Sweety 😳



Edited by ---Shailu--- - 12 years ago
-CRJ- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Allah Miyan itna lambu comment! 😲 *thud*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
awsome
jst amazing...
kriyaansh loved thm a lottt...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Loved it. A new fiction. Good start!!! Will love to read it further.
Continue soon!!!

~Dee~
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
prologue was fabulous... loved it . continue soon and pm... wow all diff story good and nice start... update when came pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awsome start
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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