ARSHI FF(MEANT FOR EACH OTHER)lastchptrupdtdpg 43 - Page 10

Hmmm Poor child Arsh is having diabetes at such a young age!!!!!!

Awesome update.
Samar in his anger provided hints to arnav, good boy. Arsh s also diabetic, poor baby. Precap sounds interesting.
Thanks 4 pm

nice ff read just now

interesting plot plz try to elaborate more clearly

Originally posted by: aayt

nice ff read just now

interesting plot plz try to elaborate more clearly

that'd be great for ur story

express their emotions their moments in detail

im sorry if u felt I criticize u I didn't meant that

I just felt right to express my thought

otherwise good work😊

thankyou for your critic response actually i do like such responses.i really wana give in detail all the emotions and feelings.but with that story wont move further.Aand i am ashamed to say that it completed 7 chapters and nothing special had happened in each's lives.but i'll try to bring all emotions and feelings from now on.

amazing and fantastic update...

Like the update :-) poor arsh...thanks 4 the pm.waiting 4 a long update, pls continue soon.

lovely, very nice update !!! loved it.. 😃

Originally posted by: SobtianluvLG

thankyou for your critic response actually i do like such responses.i really wana give in detail all the emotions and feelings.but with that story wont move further.Aand i am ashamed to say that it completed 7 chapters and nothing special had happened in each's lives.but i'll try to bring all emotions and feelings from now on.

I really appreciate u r +ve about my opinion

pm me when u update next chapter.

Originally posted by: aayt

I really appreciate u r +ve about my opinion

it may takes time but surely u gonna get good appreciation from forum

cause what speak the most is what u r writing

keep up ur good work

i'm not aperson who's afraid of critics but respect critics.and some may think it as critics but i always consider it as suggestions.u r really cute.anyway thanks for the comment.and about the response i'm getting only small but i'm happy for that coz i can't call myself as a writer. getting this much response which makes me certainly glad.