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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: arti07
oye meine kuch nahi kiya 😆 actually if piu didnt spammed me i would have never completed my first and the only FF 😳 she kept on bugging me..😆😭. gave fantastic ideas and i made total crap out of it .😆.. i still remember all those pms where she kept on telling me about intense love stories with some chii and i was like hein kesar and gulaal intense and paapi how???? but she made impossible possible😆 jokes apart all the stories are so different so novel gosh even karan johar is typecasted but she always explore new dimension in kesar and gulaal lovesaga ...now .wenever i think about kesar and gulaal i not only remember the show...but piu's FF too...hats off gal

and eeh kaa adult FF matlab chii hoga naa☺️

chalo ab jyada bhav na khao😡 I said na I loved your FF so much that I started writing because of it .and you obliged with my requests😳😳 and YES Pinky fultoo filmy FF and we were all so mad about it 😳and agar tum sab na hote to me FF's kabhi nahi likhti..All my lovely readers..Also special mention to my DOP Geeshu and Neilu...Gosh they bring my stories alive ...
and inni tareef COUGH COUGH😳😳😳Go and see FF section ppl get 500 likes and almost 100 of comments me to chotu si writer ,with the love of u all I feel pampered like a queen😳😳😳
and Adult concept is not exactly chii but something related exclusively with chii ..You will get to know soon-ish😳

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Adult concept is not exactly chii but something related exclusively with chii ..You will get to know soon-ish😳

@red scratches head 🤔didnt understand😭 but waiting eagerly

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Thank you so much for your wonderful responses now its the time for another set of questions...

1.Your favourate Gulaal and why ? My fav Gulaal has to be the vulnerable yet strong protagonist of MKKDH.I loved everything about her and I was so emotionally invested in her character that I could relate to every emotion she was feeling.I understood her hesitation...her insecurity when she started getting attracted to Kesar and was happy when she fell madly in love with him.My heart broke for her in the later chapters and I still get all moist eyed thinking about her heartbroken face when Kesar spoke those cruel words.I love this emotionally scarred woman who was not afraid to listen to her heart...who was courageous enough to take what life dished out to her and survive.In short she was an awesome character😛
2. Any scene or concept which you particularly dislike ..a concept which you could not relate to or a scene which was distasteful
hmmm should I really answer this here?Maybe I will give you my answer to you personally...what say
Looking forward for your responses😳 Jump in😳

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I just finished reading all the comments here and so I too wanted to share my views on Kesar's character from MKKDH especially the way he tried to distance himself from Gulaal.Personally I did not feel that Kesar is a coward.In my mind this is what he would have done.Of course his actions were immature and he stupidly thought that he knew what was best for Gulaal.I was really angry at him for uttering those cruel words which broke Gulaal completely but then later on I realized that the poor guy really believed that he did not deserve her love.It struck me that the guy was young and even though he pretended to be all cool and strong,he too was in fact plagued with insecurities.That made him real for me.This aspect of his character actually reminded me of his counterpart from the show who too had his doubts and fears.Kesar did know that Gulaal loved him passionately.That's why he decided to say those ridiculous lies so that she would hate him and move on but I don't think he ever realized the depth of her love for him.He did not realize that his words would shatter her very being.I actually love the 7 year leap in the story because in that time Kesar starts to truly understand what love really is and when life gives him a second chance he is able to appreciate it so much more than the first time around.

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Piu🤗I am answering your second question over here...finally😆ok I haven't found anything distasteful as such.I have only tiny little grudge with the love story of Kesar Rawat and Gulaal Tomar.As much I loved the hot,sizzling chemistry between them I really wanted to see more of an emotional bonding between them.I enjoyed the chapters where they bonded over their past...the scenes which took place in Kesar's house with his mother and Gulaal opening up about her father are some of my fav moments from the story.I would have loved to see more of such moments throughout the story.It would have helped me in connecting with their blossoming attraction which turns into love emotionally.That's my only complaint actually.Well whenever I have had reservations about a character or their actions I have expressed it in my comments so ya there's nothing much else to write.

I am looking forward to your new story.I loved the VM a lot and the story line has me absolutely intrigued so bring it on 😳

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LoLali

@LoLali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Piu . . .I have always wondered so asking . . . what instructions u give to ur DOP (Geeshu) for making vms . .i mean she has made such vms that completely look like video version of ur stories . . .so i wanna know whether u tell her the whole story or inform her about particular scenes or what ?? geesh . . .if u please . . .would love to hear from u too on this topic . .

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

😆Oh arti . .don't be shy why u did inspired her . . .ur FF was way too filmy . . .and i just loved it . . .oh god that was the very first real FF of our forum and we wr so proud of it . . .apne show waale GK se kuch milta nahi tha toh humari saari maange tere FF se puri hoti thi 😆. . .i still remember in one of my comment to ur FF i had written something like "one chii per chappi toh banata hai " .😆 . .oh boy we wr so despo . .i can understand tu woh sab likhte likhte pagala gayi thi . . .but u just nailed it .😳 . .and yup . . .the range and variety that piu has brought in GK is just outstanding .⭐️

yes tht was one big melodramatic total filmy FF😆 wonder how u ppl jhelofy it😆 and i wanted to write so many chii moments like really chii😆 but it is a sanitized forum so controlled myself and yaa piu ff are so different and capitiviting infact its much better than 200 likes FF and so called bestsellers in the market⭐️

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

^^Arti it was a beautiful FF we are still totally crazy about it😳😳😳
and Cough cough meri itni bhi tareef mat karo 😛

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: arti07

@arti: ...tell me yaar in real also there are teacher student relationship..where they get married too..mostly it is male teacher and female student..is it coz here it is other way round so u could not like it...even in movies i have seen romance shown between teacher student..and that has been accepted by audience..am just curious is it coz here teacher is female..and older than guy..

or in general u dont like

i mean take for example.. "mai hoon na" ..teacher was getting attracted to SRK..inspite of him being her student..ya there he was not of other guy's age...but still such a concept got accepted..

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

@mini : wow good to see here..come here often ...aati hi nahi aajkal..

i read ur comments and i had little difference of opinion so just sharing...

i would take KESAR of MKKDH as a coward only..he was a flawed character..he dint had the courage to face the situation..he ran away from it..and yes in doing so..he is a human...coz i really feel in real any guy in place of kesar would have done the same..

i cannot accept that he never understood gulaal's deep love..he did...

gulaal was not any other gal..gullu had lot of issues..her being his teacher, she being older to him.her insecurities related to her beauty...everything she overcame in his love...and this kesar knew..how can a guy not understand that this woman is deeply in love with him...she can do anything for him...and still he chose to be remain delusional about it... i feel he never realised the consequences of it..it was escapism at first instance..yes he had insecurities..and but all that made him coward end of the day...and as u said even i was emotionally connected to this gulaal..so when kesar left i felt very disappointed..if i was at her place..i would not have accepted him even after seven years..come what may😆

kesar of the show would not have left like that...running away doesn not fit to his character trait..and that's biggest difference of this kesar and show ka kesar...and i accepted it like that...they r different... remember how kesar of show in the end says " tu jaane chahegi na tab bhi tujhe jaane nahi doonga"...thats extremity of his love..and that strength was lacking in this kesar..in show kesar only needed her acceptance of his love and he would have fought with whole world..his only weakness was gulaal...here even after having gulaal he could not face the situation..apne kesar aise bilkul nahi karta..so i guess piu gave a much more flawed and more human kesar to us in MKKDH

and some of piu's kesar was slightly different from the show one..

for example as u mentioned about kesar rawat and gulaal tomar...personally to me it is very real..coz guys do get physically attracted even before emotionally connected.and it happens with girls too..there can be relation where there is more physical attraction than emotional bonding..and i genuinely feel that is most common kind of relationship thesedays...

infact in the show also they touched upon this...they showed kesar's sexual restlessness...even when he had not realised how deeply he is in love with her.. but ya they underplayed all those scenes coz it was TV ..so relation budding out of sexual attraction was more real to me...

am just discussing what i thought of the character...loved reading ur viewpoints...

guys bohot dino ke baad kuch likhne ka time mila..isliye chapping... 😆

Edited by nneeiill - 12 years ago