** Seductive Sensation **

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Holla guyz :)

Here i m again.. yup.. not actually back.. but still..

and i hv got a new OS for you all!

this is its first part and it will be of 2 parts :D

read quickly..



"There I m here in this so called Forest!! I will kill Sharon.. she asked me to visit her house and there see her… she didn't even tell me the address… and here this stupid car and m stuck in this f**king forest!!" she thought and frowned… she was stuck in an unknown place just because of her best friend Sharon who just moved to a new place and was calling her there… "DAMN!!! SHARON PICK UP THE PHONE!!!!" She shouted for the umpteenth time..

She was scared.. as it was dark here.. not just dark.. its was also very quiet.. just the blowing of wind and sounds of birds can be heard at that time.. it was around 11 am … "I WILL KILL HER!" she shouted at the top of her voice and then she heard something.. she gulped.. it was the sound of footsteps of someone or something.. she started sweating when those footsteps became clear.. "Who.. who.. is there?" she asked gulping..

" Ye calling some ghost or what lady?? As if the ghost wilt come and wilt say Hi!" Someone behind her said and giggled… she looked back in shock and see a Tall handsome guy standing in infront of her.. his hairs covered his face a little.. His green orbs mesmerizing… his perfect shaped body.. his muscular arms.. the little curves of his body.. all the things were just perfect and fascinating … she was staring him from past 10 minutes.. noticing his every part of the body.. he felt her gaze on his body.. he cleared his throat..

She looked back in embarrassment.. "Emm.. who.. are .. you?" she asked pausing after every word.. " ye want to know about me?" he asked with an evil smile.. she shudders seeing his smile.. "Emmm yes! Who are you?" she asked straightly… " I m Reyansh! What about ye?" he asked smiling.. "I m Kriya!" she said and put her hand forward.. he held her hand.. his warm body send chills down her spine.. she quickly pulled her hand back.. he got confused seeing her behavior..

"What are ye doing hither? Waiting for a fere?" (What are you doing here? Waiting for a friend?) he asked smiling.. "Emmm no! actually my car stopped working and my friend is picking my call!! So I m stuck here!" she said with a sad face.. "I wilt help ye!" he smiled.. "By the way ye art in the midst of a forest!" ( by the way you are in the middle of a forest!) he exclaimed looking at her.. she gulped hard and shouted.. "WHAT? You mean.. emm a forest? Oh My God! Now how will I get out of here.." she saddened..

"Where ye want to go?" he asked calmly soothing her inner senses.. "Emmm wait let me call that bitch!" she said hurriedly .. then after a second or two , realizing her foul language she looked at him.. he was standing there arching his eyebrow.. "Yikes! Sorry! I mean wait till I talk to my friend!" she said and called Sharon.. "Where the hell is your house?" she asked. "On your head baby!" "I m serious Sharon.. I m stuck in a middle of a forest! And a guy is gonna help me get out of here.." " WHAT? Wow! Is he handsome? Dashing? Hawt? Sexy?" Sharon was excited to hell! "What the hell Sharon!" kriya shouted.. "Well! See if he is good for you! He can be your boyfriend you know! Well btw the weather is romantic too!" Kriya thought for a while staring at the Handsome Hunk standing infront of her.. then she came back in her senses.. "SHARON! Tell me how much time it will take to reach your house?" "An hour or more than it!" Sharon replied calmly.. "Shit man!" "Leave it and tell me howz He?" "Go to hell!" she said and cut the call ..

"What happened?" he asked still arching his eyebrow.. "It will take an hour!" she replied sighing.. "So lets go.. where art ye from?" he said starting to walk.. " I m from Marikah ! what about you?" she asked paying attention to his question.. "I.. I m from.. emmm !" he was finding a word to tell her where he was from.. she looked at him having a doubt... "I live hither.. " he said hesitatingly.. "Here? Where?" she asked looking all around.. "I live hither nearby.. not actually hither.." he replied scratching his head..

It was about 15 minutes now when they started walking.. It was cold weather.. She was shivering and he was just staring at her.. she looked at his intense gaze.. his green orbs and the slight smile was so soothing.. the way he walks with hand in his pockets seems cool.. his ripped shirt was looking good as it was giving her view of his strong masculine body that made her shiver… she stayed quiet for a long time..

There he was checking her out.. her navy blue orbs.. her shimmering eyes … that Oh- so- sweet smile.. her perfect shaped curvy body.. he was looking gorgeous in that knee length outfit… her long, thin ;egs shinning in the moon light.. he frowned for one thing and that was that her height was a little short than his.. her was 6'2 and she was 5'11 .. she was wearing high red heels that were making her look long.. atleast of his height..

He slowly reached her hand and held her one finger with his.. rubbing his palm against her… sending thousands of rushing messages in her brain through which she just shuddered.. hs hands were very warm and she loved it.. thought both don't know each other, the warmness give both them a calm, lovely feeling.. just then she felt something cold on her back.. she shivered and left his hand gulping.. just then she realized it has started snowing.. Both looked at each other and sighed..

"Shit! Now how will I go home?" she cried…


So! how was it?
give your reviews..

and as i m a BIG kamini! i will update after ages ;)

Till than, stay tuned..


-Yours Cracked Head!

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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tera har OS do parts mein hi kyun hota hai???😆
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wrong one...

i perceived it galat...


its kr.. i😃

hmm... so jungle mein ghum ho gaye hai KR...

mast idea...;)
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res !


---unres---

loved d concept..waiting to read it further..
sharon's behaviour was wierd..afterall she is a friend😆
rey achanak se jungle mein..gr8 plan universeji 😉
and jungle mein mangal??😛
wierd again..i mean kaun aise jaane bina shuru ho jaata hai 😛
but kriyansh hai connection to pehle se hi hota hai😉
update soon !😊
Edited by preetibaheti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...rey kaisa jungle mem pahunch gaye...pls update asap...
Edited by rhu90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...

unres...

woww nice start...

rey ermmm uske sath kuchh hai kya...

i mean he is normal na...

he lives in jungle...😕

n snowfall n jungle me hero or heroine...😳

cant wait to read...

loved it...

update the next part soon...
Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

tera har OS do parts mein hi kyun hota hai???😆



Ab jab writer itni lazy ho to 2 parts me hi likhegi na!
Lazy lazy cool cool! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

wrong one...


i perceived it galat...


its kr.. i😃



You thought it was TR or wat ? =P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetibaheti

res !



---unres---

loved d concept..waiting to read it further..
sharon's behaviour was wierd..afterall she is a friend😆
rey achanak se jungle mein..gr8 plan universeji😉
and jungle mein mangal??😛
wierd again..i mean kaun aise jaane bina shuru ho jaata hai😛
but kriyansh hai connection to pehle se hi hota hai😉
update soon !😊



Hahaha Yeah totally right!
But its KR and they can start it anywhere... In jungle, Shopping mall, fire exit.. Everywhere!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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im late :(

res

unres


amazing start nims..


totally loved it yaar


tu beech beech mein kaunsi language use kar rahi thi


jo bhi tha it was nice...


i want the 2nd part soon...very very soon...

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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